Moments

Moments

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love scribble ~

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Mark Arian Art

 

 

 

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Quiet as a whisper

softly as can be

As dim as a shadow

sweeps a memory

 

When it's least expected

though faded and unclear

a feeling so divine

tells me you are near

 

For a precious moment

if only for a while

the comfort you bring

leaves me with a smile...

 

~~~

 

 

© 2014 MsJewel


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i learnt something from the poems theme......... wen u r siting alone u r confronted by a soft sweet memory........wich u hav never expected that it would come at that very time...............though that memory is a bt blurr but it fills u with a sense of happiness and a smile on ur face.......... nice nice....... n cool use of words.........

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you felt this one. Thanks so much for your kind comment :) Julie
Nidheesh Sankaran

10 Years Ago

That all depicts a nice creation miss



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When my days are gray and I can't see tomorrow I just find your page and the sun comes shining through the clouds. Beautiful Julie.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are too kind. Hugs, Julie
I felt as gentle moment sweep over me as I read this. It left a smile on my face as well ( : O )

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Roger :) Julie
A feeling so divine
Tells me you are near...
This only happens with soulmates. The way your exquisite words are woven together to give the reader a wonderful feeling. Sometimes all that counts is the silent conversation,his warming presence making you secure.Even though its for a second,the memory is cherished.. :) A really good scribble

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Sophy :) Julie
Gentle and touching. Your writing is a breath of fresh air. :) Well penned.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie
Your poems and imagery are always smooth as silk my friend, and never fail to 'leave me with a smile'...well done as always :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you sweet friend :) Julie
Ms Jewel are you reading my mind these days?? :) This piece speak volumes to me. The divine feelings of a love so true, deep and meaningful that just the slightest thought of the one that we love can leave us with such comfort and although not there they make us smile. Loved this!

Troy

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm so glad you enjoyed it Troy. It is those wonderful memories we hold close that bring us comfort.. read more
Julie always takes me into a world that not only is it alien to me at times it makes me feel jelous and also like Fred Flinstone of how rustic and rudimentary my views are when it comes to embelish the heart realm. And because she places me in a place were I feel insecure I can only ask , How can such beaitiful feelings, Quiet as a whisper? Dim as a shadow? Feelingg so divine? If only fleeting but you complete me?
I not only feel astounded but I think there is a lot to learn from this words.


Julie I have to ask and with the greatest respect Do you ever just say to him "Go and clean the kitchen" "Damn it! John you spilled coffee on the clean linnen?"

Sorry had to ask.

Thankyou

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I lost my sweetheart to an aneurysm very suddenly a few years ago. For a long time I was angry - al.. read more
Sometime just a few words says it all, such precious moments they were beautiful hallmark moments they are. Julie.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for supporting my little scribbles. :) Julie
A heart worming write Julie! Thanks for sharing it!

-CW

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cody :) Julie
There's something to be said about a comfortable love.
I know that sounds unromantic but it can't be exciting ALL the time.
I love those quiet moment, sitting together, reading a book, the paper. Just enjoying a comfortable silence together and every so often a smile. So beautiful Julie. xx

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you sweet friend :) Julie

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MsJewel
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