Moments

~ a love scribble ~

 

Mark Arian Art

 

 

 

~~~

Quiet as a whisper

softly as can be

As dim as a shadow

sweeps a memory

 

When it's least expected

though faded and unclear

a feeling so divine

tells me you are near

 

For a precious moment

if only for a while

the comfort you bring

leaves me with a smile...

 

~~~

 

 

Reviews

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

i learnt something from the poems theme......... wen u r siting alone u r confronted by a soft sweet memory........wich u hav never expected that it would come at that very time...............though that memory is a bt blurr but it fills u with a sense of happiness and a smile on ur face.......... nice nice....... n cool use of words.........

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt this one. Thanks so much for your kind comment :) Julie

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

That all depicts a nice creation miss

[Lily Finch]

wow so ethereal write.. beautifully penned .... enjoyed :)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Short and sweet. I loved reading this piece. :)

[pvpd sri harsha]

superb madam superb...
nothing to write...

[SmittyJas]

Please stay with me for a while made me smile and have a hopeful chance at love cupid's arrow could strike at the midnight hour. Now that wouldn't suck to much. Loved this small intimate poem.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jim :) Julie

[Michael G.]

You have written the definition of the "warm and fuzzies." It left me with that feeling of being all wrapped up in a soft, warm blanket. Wonderful work.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Michael :) Julie

[TL Boehm]

soft and gentle - so rare in the atmosphere lately. this little poem was like a warm breeze. Well done.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Even when our loved ones are not here their memories live on.Another touching and sweetly gentle pen Jules ;-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[AprilRN1210]

I am running out of ways of telling you how beautiful you write... this one is such a heartfelt expression of how deeply and tenderly someone can touch you when needed.. just knowing that someone is there and that they love you can ease the pain if just for a moment.. this is sublime... love this one..

[adreamer]

Once again you capture moments of are time so beautifully again in reading this one, no muse pen is needed in this one, a beautiful poem it comes from your heart and soul, like all of your writing do Julie. :) Larry

[cycy]

i shall say it once again....just put them all in a book julie..il buy that one for sure :)