A Whisper and A Rose

~ to be in love with a poet...~

 

 

A rose upon my pillow

a whisper, soft and sweet

as smooth as velvet petals

the words of love he speaks..

 

of poetry as gentle

and softer than a beam

of pale moonlight shining

upon a lovely dream

 

of melodies as graceful

as twilights lullaby

of golden dawns still tangled

in every moonlit sigh

 

of our forever after

together as love grows …

 

Whispers upon my pillow

                                of love,

                                                 soft as a rose

 

Reviews

[WILDERNESS]

you take special care to make it perfect, the art, the poetry, and the effect is magnificient. Great work and a lovers treat .....................

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment :) Julie

[AYVID N]

This is exquisitely beautiful. I held my breath till the concluding line. Please accept my compliments!

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

Julie twilight grows on my eyes as I hug your sweet renditions of love's beauty.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed my little scribble Alfred. Have a lovely evening :) Julie

[stars are far]

wow, that is so awww, i loved this so much..
very amazing

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[willweb]

Julie, if there were a theme park based on beauty and love, ever attraction would be one of your poems and the price of admission could never be too high. I love your work.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the wonderful comment my sweet friend :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

Your romance is wistful and soft as a feather. Great, as always, Ms. Jewel

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Madalyn Beck]

I don't know how you do it, but this made me sigh with want and desire. To be in a love as tender and sweet and delicate as this. You have left the reader filled with a desire for what you have penned here. Fantastic! Going into my favorites! xo :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet lady! :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

This takes my breath away Julie!

Such softness in this piece that really takes me to a different place. The love that 2 people can share is simply a dream and so was this piece.

Troy

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it Troy. Thank you for supporting my little scribbles. :) Julie

[Fran Marie]

a lovely delicate piece.... flowing ever so softly...nicely penned!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Fran :) Julie

[Enigma]

Beautiful, soft, sensuous. Enjoyed reading this. Loved the rhymes! :)

[MsJewel]

I appreciate your kind words. Thanks so much :) Julie