A Whisper and A Rose

~ to be in love with a poet...~

 

 

A rose upon my pillow

a whisper, soft and sweet

as smooth as velvet petals

the words of love he speaks..

 

of poetry as gentle

and softer than a beam

of pale moonlight shining

upon a lovely dream

 

of melodies as graceful

as twilights lullaby

of golden dawns still tangled

in every moonlit sigh

 

of our forever after

together as love grows …

 

Whispers upon my pillow

                                of love,

                                                 soft as a rose

 

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful poem. Nicely penned.

[Adreamer's Bluejay]

I love the format of this piece and how its something common with a touch of something unique. I love the simplistic writing style and how the rhymes do not feel forced. Great job, I especially like the way your voice shines through this write

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate it very much. :) Julie

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

I love the short rhyming style. The poem sings. Wonderful.

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a velvety soft love poem, Julie. To have a rose and poetry on the pillow, to know your love will speak to you poetically....ah, that is romance. Absolutely lovely, Julie. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi :) Julie

[Danny Lau]

This came from the heart and that is easy to tell...really amazing poem

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Poets have a magic which can only be a reflection of their muse...

He will make you a rose like none other, weaving his velvet words...if only he existed outside the realm of dreams...but would you want the fantasy to ever end? I think not... ;)

Lovely work of art!~xoxo~:)

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed my poem Robbie. Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Your words are always exquisitely gorgeous and poignant Julie, this is polished of genuine endearment, wrapped within whispers of poetry and love. Outstanding my sweet poetic friend.

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[wordman]

a beautiful and touching write

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Ron :) Julie

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

Thats really awesome.... rose, velvet petals.. poetry beam moonlit, dream twilights lullaby golden dawns sign ..... such simple normal common words used so beautifully in this poem......... It was simply excellent!!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie