Shades of Blue

~ a romantic little scribble ~

Shades of blue in endless skies

               crystal clear his lovely eyes…

 

 

Soft pastels surrounding me

         with each gaze, tenderly

                  I’m embraced with his love

                         infinite...like skies above

 

Cloudless heavens gently dance

                     in the beauty of each glance...

 

Shades of blue, in reverie

           I rise then I’m falling free

                                      soft as a breath upon a breeze

                         of whispers, wrapped in the tease

                                     of silken sheets in disarray

 

                     Lingering in his love I’ll stay

                   captured by his lovely eyes

 

                                Shades of blue in endless skies

Author's Note

art by Sergey Ignatenko

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I definitely think blue is the color that captivates many of us. A blue sky is so mesmerizing & blue eyes always capture my attention. I've had this experience, where the blue color of someone's eyes just send me into a reverie. You've revealed many sweet, gentle observations of what blue does to you.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words -) Julie

[Jetta Zippora]

Beautifully flowing words :) Such a pleasure to read.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Ohhhh la la!..c'est magnifique!

The skies are endless when you write about love... and blue... oh so sweet, in blue...

I can get lost in this kind of reverie... sigh...

Exquisite write, Julie!~xoxo~:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet lady! Hugs, Julie

[Emily]

Lovely, well done:) :) :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Emily :) Julie

[little thoughts]

'beautiful' is a word to describe it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[stars are far]

Thats very wonderful, i liked the rhymes there and the whole poem .
very amazing work

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Ruth]

Ah, such sublime poise...ever a delight to read you Julie, adds shine to my day x

[MsJewel]

Thank you Poppy! :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

This is gorgeous. For the blue eyed muse. A wonderful piece again.

[MsJewel]

I appreciate your kind words. Thanks so much :) Julie

[Lyan]

Right from the first lines,it was capturing.thank you for such a lovely piece^^

[MsJewel]

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem. I appreciate it very much :) Julie

[Bowers]

Oh my... youve left me speechless im afraid. This was perhaps the most beautifully written romantic poem ive read on this site. Ever word was so graceful, and tenderly written as they flowed together perfectly. You have such talent, I admire the way youve written this...
Amazing....

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your very generous comment. Thank you! :) Julie

[A. Amos]

Cloudless heavens gently dance
in the beauty of each glance...

Such a soothing lines, the whole poetry was a pleasure read!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie