You and I

~ a scribble for Hannah ~

 

Steve Hanks ~ Shelter for the Heart

 

 

 

Raindrop tears from heaven fall

sunlit wishes gently stall

under shadowed clouds of gray

let me hold your hand today

 

I’ll be your shelter from the storm

my umbrella’s safe and warm

and as these tears softly fall

catch one,

               catch two,

                                catch them all

 

and when the storm has passed us by

we’ll paint rainbows

                                   …you and I

Author's Note

a scribble for Hannah ~ I love you

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW, such an amazing write. :) Well done Julie.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Your heart is so full of love...and it brims over into each and every line your write. The rhyming in this one is flawless and not forced....which is quite a feat in such an emotional write. Very lovely, Julie. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi. :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

A beautiful write again Julie. The heart that went into this truly beats loud.

Regards
Troy

[MsJewel]

Thank you Troy. Have a lovely weekend my friend :) Julie

[wildn0226]

How pretty, I can feel the shared love in the poem. Very sweet, it makes me smile..

[MsJewel]

I'm glad I could make you smile. Thank you :) Julie

[willweb]

This poem really touched me Julie. It was so caring and heart felt. I really enjoyed reading this today as it is raining right now outside my window. :)

[MsJewel]

catch one, catch two, catch them all... Wishing you beautiful rainbows my sweet friend! :) Julie

[stars are far]

That was so ... elegant, amazing, well written..
you have the soul of a poet.. well done my friend :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Ruth]

Sentimental and heartfelt, gorgeous! x

[MsJewel]

Thank you Poppy :) Julie

[wordman]

this was a beautiful tribute,don`t know hannah

[MsJewel]

Hannah is my daughter. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[wordman]

hello hannah

[Cory Barrett]

So lovely, makes me smile.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

An adorable write :)
I have been wondering lately how I'd feel about my children ♥
What an incredible force that bounds mothers and their kids together :')
very warm emotions indeed xx
God bless Hannah :)

[MsJewel]

It is a love and a bound that is impossible to describe. Thank you for your lovely comment sweet one! :) Julie