I'll Wait

~ to be in love with a poet...or is it the poetry...~

art ~  Tamara de Lempicka

 

 

~~~

Tonight

When the moon beckons and the stars wink

and the curtains sway in the midnight breeze…

 

I’ll wait

 

for a whisper of the words you weave,

a serenade of all that is love

to slip through the sky in poetic colors of romance

and tiptoe softly across my pillow

capturing my heart

as I dream

only

of

you...

 

Tonight

~~~

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Across the ages the night sky has been looked up to for inspiration and solace. A place where we expect to find heaven and those who wait for us. A metaphore for a life that is looking up perhaps. The mystery of the stars draws us to gaze and dream. A freedom we cannot expect to achieve.
Another wonderful piece of writing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Those sweet dreams are all we have sometimes. Beautiful artwork and hopeful words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poem my dear friend. I need poetry for love. Last utopia for us dreamers.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Utopia for us dreamers...how lovely. Thank you :) Julie

[J. K. Beach]

Your words and their beautifully invoked images cascade down gently in this piece. The quiet patience she shows as she waits for him hides a depth of emotion and passion. The simple, heartfelt words you have penned express far more than their number would lead the reader to believe. Nicely done!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[AprilRN1210]

this is quite beautiful ma'am.. it feels like a gentle breeze flowing into the ears of a lover.. softly whispering all that is in her heart. the construction even mirrors the delicate swaying of the words into his soul... you always weave such spells of enchantment with your romantic elegance.. another gorgeous write:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady! :) Julie

[AprilRN1210]

It was my pleasure, as always.

[Trevor Barnett]

A very beautiful write, and I love the structure!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trevor :) Julie

[Trevor Barnett]

You're welcome!

[onceloved]

Another very beautiful dedication to the one that will always hold YOUR heart in a special place.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Cory Barrett]

Lullabies whispered by a thoughtful sorry teller. Verbally protecting you from anxious pictures behind closed eyes. We sleep knowing worries will receive a new coat of paint, and given a digestible guise of normality.

Beautiful write, Ms.Jewel.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Wow this poem is amazing Julie. :-) love it.

Kaze~

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet one! :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, it was my pleasure. :-)

[Kieta!]

This is perfect imagery and a beautiful poem! I love the words you use!! There are so many amazing words and phrases that I can't even quote them without quoting half of the poem :) Great job with this!!!! :)

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your generous comment. Thank you :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

Simple, soft and loving, and the format, colour, font, and image all add to the overall picturesque romance. Another well done verse.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for supporting my little scribbles. I appreciate you :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

No problem, there usually isn't much to correct, but I catch you if I can ...:)