I'll Wait

~ to be in love with a poet...or is it the poetry...~

art ~  Tamara de Lempicka

 

 

~~~

Tonight

When the moon beckons and the stars wink

and the curtains sway in the midnight breeze…

 

I’ll wait

 

for a whisper of the words you weave,

a serenade of all that is love

to slip through the sky in poetic colors of romance

and tiptoe softly across my pillow

capturing my heart

as I dream

only

of

you...

 

Tonight

~~~

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Across the ages the night sky has been looked up to for inspiration and solace. A place where we expect to find heaven and those who wait for us. A metaphore for a life that is looking up perhaps. The mystery of the stars draws us to gaze and dream. A freedom we cannot expect to achieve.
Another wonderful piece of writing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

How can there be endless love?! How can someone never get tired?💘💘
Can the feeling be mutual? I wonder whenever I read your writings💕

[MsJewel]

I believe there is endless love..it is rare..but it is out there. Hugs, Julie

[Daydreamer]

From both of the partners? Your poems always leave me curious♥
Fascinating Indeed!
Hugs back 😂♥

[Moonie]

Excellent use of words. I love the you presented it.:))
Blessings!
Moon's fairest daughter.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Well I think you can fall in love with a poet through their words, for a true poet writes from the heart and wears their heart in their verse.

Another passionately romantic poem.

[MsJewel]

I tend to agree with you. Thank you for your visit. It's always lovely to see you :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are most welcome Julie.

[redzone]

Hi Julie, even while you "wait", your pen quietly finds its romantic heart and captures ours with your heart.. tonite, tomorrow nite and many other nights. Thank goodness we don't have to wait for these romantic visions .. i hope the poem you await knocks your sox off ..

A small suggestion, not sure you need that "and" starting the 3rd line just a comma after wink .. see what you think ..

Love your poetry Julie .. the possibilities in them
~~redzone

[MsJewel]

I like your suggestion - I think I'll change it. Thanks so much for your lovely comment and suggestion :) Julie

[willweb]

So much love must fill your heart Julie, so much that it constantly flows onto these pages. Another gentle beautiful poem.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

awww, this is so beautiful, I think can be both the poet and the poem. : )

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie

[A. Amos]

This was elegantly beautiful...always enjoy your work!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[wordman]

come my darling as I sleep into my dreams you shall creep
lay with me for a while and I will awake with a smile lovely write julie

[MsJewel]

Your comments are beautiful poetry Ron :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

I have a special someone that this reminds me of so much. Her words whisper to me as I lay dreaming, wishing and holding onto hope for her every night.

This was beautiful.

Regards
Troy

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt this one Troy. Thanks so much :) Julie

[stars are far]

wow, that must be some sort of a dream, i loved that, sweet, and classy.
your poems are classy thats what make them unique to me, well done.
Keep the best coming up :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie