Beauty of the Night

~ inspired by Lord Byron's She Walks in Beauty ~

art ~ Karol Bak

 

 

 

“She walks in beauty, like the night”

Lord Byron

 

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If my beauty is compared

to night...with loving eyes

then let the dawn’s light be spared

I’ll wrap you in my skies

of amethyst and moonlit glow

and stars so tenderly

that my heart shall overflow

if you will walk with me…

Author's Note

Inspired by Lord Byron's She Walks in Beauty

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I would say the last line makes this so touching and romantic... Life, lovers, anything can be beautiful but if it isn't cherished, adored, and shared then what is the point?

To share all that is you, tenderly, wrapping your essence around that of your lover defines what it is to truly love.. The giving of oneself entirely to another.... you have elegantly expressed this in your romantic way.....


nicely done as always girl.

[MsJewel]

Your comments are always so encouraging. Thank you April. I appreciate you :) Julie

[AprilRN1210]

You're welcome ma'am.. You are as bright and beautiful as the work you bless us with.. I am honored to call you friend... :)

[Saddam]

I’ll wrap you in my skies
of amethyst and moonlit glow
and stars so tenderly.

After reading your work I start thinking about satuation. So beautiful piece as moon light night.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you for the wonderful comment :) Julie

[wordman]

good for lord Byron he brought this beautiful write from you

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron. He is one of my favorites. :) Julie

[KWP]

very inspiring tone, romantic as ever xx

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

- Such beauty.
- Master piece.
- I love it.

Kaze~ :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet one! :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)

[Latifa]

I love it, very beautiful as always.

[MsJewel]

Thank you. I appreciate your kind words. :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

some pretty good inspiration to take from...

i wonder what it would be like if there were only night, and moonbeams and stars...

maybe there would be more love?

very romantic piece.

[MsJewel]

I love classic poetry and Lord Byron is one of my favorites....
thank you for your kind words Jacob. I appreciate you :) Julie

[onceloved]

Beautiful creative writing you have there the picture was stunning too.

[MsJewel]

Thank you. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

Well inspired and well written, a soft romantic kiss to Lord Byron's poem. I really like the form and the painting too.

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady! :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

You are very welcome, and while romantic poems are not my strong suit, they are yours.

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful poem, like a clear moon night

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie