Moon Petals

Moon Petals

A Poem by MsJewel
"

~ a romantic little scribble ~

"

Aleksey Marina Photography

 

 

 

Flowers dance in the evening breeze

petals scattering wildly

as the sounds of poetry trickle from passion’s lips

teasing wanting hearts

 

Night falls

 

Gather the shadows darling

Let's dance and let the breeze

carry us away

like…

 

Moon petals

~~~

 

© 2014 MsJewel


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Beautiful artwork and words.
"Let's dance and let the breeze
carry us away
like…
Moon petals"
Nice place to be would be dancing and flowing with the breeze. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome Julie.



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The moon is so romantic, another piece of romantic bliss from you… that famous song is in my head now
"Because the night belongs to loves, because the night belongs to lust."

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cowboy. Have a lovely day my friend :) Julie
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

You are welcome… you too sweetie :))
"Gather the shadows darling"--amazing! The poem itself flows as beautifully as moon petals in the night.:))



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie
Romantic and sweetly scented sentiments, love the poetry line, just perfect Julie :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you lovely lady :) Julie
You have a very romantic side of you Julie, when it comes to writing very beautiful poetry in the way you do, thank you for sharing the beautiful side of your talent with all of us again

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
teasing wanting hearts this phrase caught my attention

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ron :) Julie
As always very nice ma'am.... "the sounds of poetry trickle from passion's lips teasing wanting hearts"... That is what I aspire to do, and that is what you did here.. scribble me a fan:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie
I like the airy, light feel to this piece. A beautiful verse.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Romantic, graceful, playful.
Another beautiful poem. :)
It makes the heart feel lighter.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks so much :) Julie

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Added on July 6, 2014
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Tags: romance, love, passion, fantasy, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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