Pink

~ a little scribble ~

 ~~~

The gentle blush that fills a room

soft as the lightest kiss

of innocence; a flowers bloom

sweet lips of tenderness

smooth as satin though tiny bites

a nibble or a quiver

of ecstasy always invites

a tingle or a shiver

on silky skin...the pastel hue

will make a lover think

"How lovely is the taste of you

when all dressed up in pink”

~~~

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... the soft pink of a
baby's smile... the soft pink of a
bride's bouquet... Love's wink...
Julie.. your poetry is a soft rain
that blushes with tender beauty.
truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

Everything's prettier in pink! Thanks for your visit Pat. It is always a delight to hear from you! Hugs, Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

Julie... You are as sweet as watermelon
on a summer day. hugs... Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Mmmmmm...the soft sensuality in this one is charismatic, Julie. I never wear the color pink....I think I wore it too much as a child. Still, this poem makes me think I should run to the store to buy something pink! :) Good one. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

I can definitely picture you in pink Lydi! I hope you're enjoying a beautiful summer. Hugs, Julie

[willweb]

Another beautiful and soft feeling poem Julie. Who would have thought the color pink could be made to sound more soothing than it already was. Leave it to you. I really enjoyed this one.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Ayushi]

Lovely and refreshing just like "PINK".
Very well written :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you dear one! :) Julie

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Wonderful way to describe a color.
Beautifully written piece.
I love how you can make something as simple as a color, have such a deep meaning.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

You are welcome :) Cimmy

[R. L. Hill]

I love this! Pink is one of my favorite colors. I love to feel cute and pink, and this poem describes the feeling when a lover notices how adorable you are and wants to nibble. Sexy and sweet with a hint of naughty cuteness. Well done, deary

[MsJewel]

Finally! Another lover of Pink! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this little scribble. Thank you sweet friend. :) Julie

[Cristina]

Really nice work and very creative, I like so many of your poems.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Cristina. :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Pink is my favorite color lol. Another lovely pen for sure Jules :)

[MsJewel]

Mine too! :) Julie

[KWP]

ooh I think that was just last night :) hahahaha ...

written in such a fashion where nothing at all needs to be hidden

thanks for the memories lovely lady ;)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment my sweet friend! :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

- Very romantic.
- Creative.
- it flows so well together.
- Your a very talented writer.

Kaze~

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Kaze - thank you :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome. :-)