Never Apart ~ a collaboration by Trace and MsJewel

~ a collaboration with my favorite poet and dear friend Trace ~

 

 

Never Apart

 

~~~

In peaceful dreams and sunset scenes

twilight beckons a new day

Through misty skies and velvet sighs

the evening slips away

 

Yet silver stars, shining afar

still linger in your eyes

And with each gaze, a lovely haze

softens the breathless sighs

 

While in this bliss, I reminisce

watching as clouds drift by

I dream of love, gazing above

as rainbows fill my eyes

 

Then beauty blends, with ink and pen

flowing deep as the sea

To softly sway and gently play

the sweetest melody

 

Of treasures found, verses abound

as happiness fills our hearts

Not ever alone, within a poem,

our words will never part

~~~

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Julie, you and Trace could open a business writing beautiful love verses for Valentine's Day cards. This flows so smoothly. The rhythm and rhyme is pure perfection. I don't know which of you wrote which stanzas, but they are all so warm and wonderful. Another winner of a collaboration. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Lydi! :) Julie

[wordman]

a beautiful flow and words of wisdom loved it

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[Matching Socks]

Jeez, I'm with April...
So beautiful, emotional. My heart feels heavy and I have lump in my throat.
Very lovely collaboration.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. You two, create a journey of beauty and a happy ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your encouraging words :) Julie

[s y e]

You guys just write so beautifully together, your pens merge into one and out comes a beautiful poem like this. Ahhh, sighs, this is what we live for.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Cory Barrett]

Such a lovely romantic nod to days passing.

[Frieda P]

Poetically perfect symmetry you two. Another sublime collaboration.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Frieda :) Julie

[Ayushi]

Very well done... Your write depicts deep as well as true friendship.
Last stanza is really awesome :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment and compliment :) Julie

[onceloved]

Very compassionate feeling you two have for one another and so beautifully written, feelings that come from deep within you two and they are very precious memories indeed that you share with us Julie.

[MsJewel]

Trace is a wonderful poet and a very special friend. I know he will appreciate your lovely comment as much as I do. Thank you :) Julie

[onceloved]

Very beautiful bond you two share with one another for a long time, a bond that will be never be broken..!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

two friends, one voice. beauty of the stars captured with ink and pen and the sentiment in this flows as deeply as the sea...you guys write so well together and make such music with your words.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Jacob. Trace and I have been writing together for a long time. He is a dear friend and an amazing poet. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this poem and I know he will be as well. :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have read him...and i like his work very , very much!