Never Apart ~ a collaboration by Trace and MsJewel

~ a collaboration with my favorite poet and dear friend Trace ~

 

 

Never Apart

 

~~~

In peaceful dreams and sunset scenes

twilight beckons a new day

Through misty skies and velvet sighs

the evening slips away

 

Yet silver stars, shining afar

still linger in your eyes

And with each gaze, a lovely haze

softens the breathless sighs

 

While in this bliss, I reminisce

watching as clouds drift by

I dream of love, gazing above

as rainbows fill my eyes

 

Then beauty blends, with ink and pen

flowing deep as the sea

To softly sway and gently play

the sweetest melody

 

Of treasures found, verses abound

as happiness fills our hearts

Not ever alone, within a poem,

our words will never part

~~~

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Julie, you and Trace could open a business writing beautiful love verses for Valentine's Day cards. This flows so smoothly. The rhythm and rhyme is pure perfection. I don't know which of you wrote which stanzas, but they are all so warm and wonderful. Another winner of a collaboration. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much Lydi! :) Julie

[Persona]

Collaborations always bring about the best ideas. Well done.The rhythm and length of lines is good and it has a gentle voice to it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[willweb]

The best collaborative team on this site. This poem was beautiful and overflowing with affection. Very beautiful. Wonderful, both of you.

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet friend. You have made my day and I know Trace will be thrilled as well by your lovely compliment. We have been writing together for at least five years. Trace is a fabulous poet and a dear, dear friend. Thanks again :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

Great flow and an even tone here made this work so well.

Regards
Troy

[MsJewel]

Thank you Troy :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love it love it love it!

Kaze~ :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome Julie. :-)

[KWP]

one cannot help but to feel all warm and fuzzy reading these words .. well done you two x x

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

╰☆╮Oh, such a beautiful collaboration.╰☆╮

[MsJewel]

Thank you Brittany - I love the little stars! :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

"Then beauty blends, with ink and pen
flowing deep as the sea
To softly sway and gently play
the sweetest melody

Of treasures found, verses abound"

An amazing collaboration. Reminds me of the golden days with Frieda and Jack...Bravo both...:).................

[MsJewel]

It is a wonderful compliment to be compared to two stellar poets like Jack and Frieda. Thank you dear friend for your always encouraging words :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[A. Amos]

You both did a great job, truly enjoyed the read...

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[A. Amos]

you're most welcome