Still

~ a heartprint ~

art ~ garmash

 

So quiet and yet

there are moments

when the peaceful sound of silence

is left in the wake

            of a lavender blue sky

 

as a warm breeze sings

a serenade of butterfly whispers

     twirling

               in the beauty of the day

                         fluttering

                                   on tiny wings

to the sweet surrender of everlasting love

 

                   only a dream away…

 

Today disappears

and I’m wrapped once again

                 in your love

 

"m'apprendre à danser mon amour

comme les papillons dans la prairie

gracieuse,

                   belle,

                             insouciante"

 

So quiet and yet

there are moments

             my heart remembers...Je t’aime

                                  still

              

Author's Note

translation:
"teach me to dance my love
like the butterflies in the meadow
graceful, beautiful, carefree"

Je t’aime - I love you

Reviews

[redzone]

Julie, your lavender skies and those butterfly songs are heard all the way over here, even the French, echos off tenement walls.. and I tell everyone, Julie's in the house.... people here are clapping Julie, thanking you for some beauty in this harsh, harsh world... me too..
~~redzone

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet Curt. Thank you for your lovely comment. You made my day Hugs, Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Julie, your poetry is spectacular and special. Your a very talented writer. :-))

Kaze~

[MsJewel]

Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. I'm thrilled you enjoy my scribbles! :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, Julie. :-))

[Alfred Kukitz]

I have to say Julie your poetry is as beautiful as you.

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet Alfred. Thank you :) Julie

[Tom]

Indeed, one of those timeless moments!

A colour filled reverie, classy indeed Ms Jewel !

[MsJewel]

Thank you Tom. It is always lovely when you visit my page :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

I love french Jules learnt a little ,its a beautiful language as beautiful as your poem my dear .Much amazing lines there my friend :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Latifa]

lovely, I loved the french incorporation to the poem , it makes it more romantic

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Fran Marie]

quite lovely and beautifully penned...also..nice picture complements your words so well...

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. Garmash is one of my favorite artists. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :) Julie

[Saddam]

Beautiful dear...
And yes...Je t’aime
Je t’aime....Je t’aime.

[MsJewel]

Je t'aime sweet friend :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

"Today disappears
and I’m wrapped once again
in your love"
A beautiful poem Julie. Good to be wrapped in the arms of love. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie

[stars are far]

That is so amazing, done in a perfect way..
well done friend :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Moonie]

Enchanting, simply lovely. I love that you included the french part. It really helped beautify the poem.:))

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you :) Julie