It's Always Been You

~ a romantic scribble ~

art ~ desire by pino

 

 

It’s always been you…

 

rising with the dawn

cascading bright ribbons of light

                       warmly

                               around my heart

 

never paling with the moon

 

yet

leaving me longing for your kisses in the night

where dreams of you are a serenade,

                      a nightingales song,

           beautiful and wild

and love is carved in hearts with roses…

you have picked the sweetest bouquet bound with my heartstrings

                                     in this land of fantasy

 

yes,

           it’s always been you,

 

                                         let it be me

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

Such beautiful longing in this, it left me feeling a little sad. I don't know it may just be me. I feel the love, the passion, but it is as if it is unsure, searching, questioning if the other feels the same. I do know one thing maam--you always make me FEEL something when I read your works, and that to me is the sign of a great writer:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words April. :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Damn girl, your romantic poetry makes me swoon and it isn't even for me… if the guy this is for is not completely touch then he is emotionally dead inside.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. He loved it.... :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well I am glad to hear that or I'd have to come over there and slap him upside the head to knock some sense into him :))

You are welcome.

[MsJewel]

LOL! You are too cute!

[Ayushi]

"never paling with the moon
yet
leaving me longing for your kisses in the night"
So romantic and touching..you can win anyone's heart with this ..

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[A. Amos]

Simply elegant and romance pour out every single word of yours!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome...

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is beautiful. I don't know if I'm on the right track, but it made me think of how I felt when I first met the man I've married, and how I wanted to be with him so badly and wasn't sure if he felt the same. Regardless, this is purely wonderful.

[MsJewel]

That is exactly the feeling I was going for. You are lucky you found each other. Have a lovely day Brittany :) Julie

[redzone]

So many wonderfully rich and romantically enticed lines here Julie, and so little space to explore each one. I could quote each one but you already know your words... Hoping this is enough I will only say, you and your poetry "never pale in the moon"... and leave you my "sigh".
Beautifully done Julie
~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment. I appreciate you :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

another beautiful love poem...and that last line...reminds me of the Everly Brothers' song "let it be me"

a beautiful song too..had me reading and humming the tune.

[MsJewel]

Sing on my friend. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Have a lovely day Jacob! :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

A nightingale song of the dark nights indeed bound with the melody strings of the heartstrings. You cut the ribbon of the dawn to warm the remainders...A wonderful write...:).........................

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Sami. Thank you for your lovely words :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time.....:).........

[Frieda P]

I know I keep repeating myself when I say how lovely your scribbles are, but that's the best word to describe it, it's a simple sentiment inextricably and eloquently written...superb Julie! :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, always good to have a 'sigh' moment in the morning. :)