It's Always Been You

It's Always Been You

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic scribble ~

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art ~ desire by pino

 

 

It’s always been you…

 

rising with the dawn

cascading bright ribbons of light

                       warmly

                               around my heart

 

never paling with the moon

 

yet

leaving me longing for your kisses in the night

where dreams of you are a serenade,

                      a nightingales song,

           beautiful and wild

and love is carved in hearts with roses…

you have picked the sweetest bouquet bound with my heartstrings

                                     in this land of fantasy

 

yes,

           it’s always been you,

 

                                         let it be me

© 2014 MsJewel


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Such beautiful longing in this, it left me feeling a little sad. I don't know it may just be me. I feel the love, the passion, but it is as if it is unsure, searching, questioning if the other feels the same. I do know one thing maam--you always make me FEEL something when I read your works, and that to me is the sign of a great writer:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words April. :) Julie



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Once again my heart beats a little faster as I read your beautiful words today Julie. This was exceptional and flowed so softly as I read. I really enjoy your poetry.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
That so nicee, i loved it very much :D
That is well done :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie
stars are far

10 Years Ago

my pleasure dear :)
Awash with pleasure and desires....
Pleasant...warm.

Scotty

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

:)
Scott.......
In this poem I see a wreath of feelings and metaphors well combined together and somehow intricate and simple at the same time!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
another beautiful write of love let it be me great write

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ron :) Julie
What a beautiful and sentimental poem.

With longing and desires for that special someone.
Always hoping that one day they will be together.

This is such a heartwarming and personal dedication of love....
very touching and very special to me.

XOXOX. ... Trace


Posted 10 Years Ago


MsJewel

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it Trace. Thank you sweetie. :) Julie
Trace

10 Years Ago

Thank you for sharing your heart with so many to enjoy
And for sharing it with me personally.<.. read more
Such beautiful longing in this, it left me feeling a little sad. I don't know it may just be me. I feel the love, the passion, but it is as if it is unsure, searching, questioning if the other feels the same. I do know one thing maam--you always make me FEEL something when I read your works, and that to me is the sign of a great writer:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words April. :) Julie
There is such depth and enticement in this poem. Wonderfully job Julie ^-^
-QuanaWana

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
You show the true depth of someone who as a very romantic heart that lives within them and I'm looking forward reading some more of you're writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

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