It's Always Been You

~ a romantic scribble ~

art ~ desire by pino

 

 

It’s always been you…

 

rising with the dawn

cascading bright ribbons of light

                       warmly

                               around my heart

 

never paling with the moon

 

yet

leaving me longing for your kisses in the night

where dreams of you are a serenade,

                      a nightingales song,

           beautiful and wild

and love is carved in hearts with roses…

you have picked the sweetest bouquet bound with my heartstrings

                                     in this land of fantasy

 

yes,

           it’s always been you,

 

                                         let it be me

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

Such beautiful longing in this, it left me feeling a little sad. I don't know it may just be me. I feel the love, the passion, but it is as if it is unsure, searching, questioning if the other feels the same. I do know one thing maam--you always make me FEEL something when I read your works, and that to me is the sign of a great writer:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words April. :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Such a beautiful write, very emotional. :-)

Kaze~

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet lady! :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, Julie. :-)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

Such deep emotion. Opening the heart to examination.
I always enjoy your poetry but this is in a class alone.

[Fran Marie]

I especially liked the line "and love is carved in hearts with roses'

a beautiful penned piece of exquisite poetry ..

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful artwork and sweet words. Always a pleasure to fall into your words of passion and want. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yearning for your beloved hoping that they feel for you as you do for them.Another beauty Jules :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet one! :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Chris Micha]

Let it be me. This was the sounding message in this whole piece. Always an honor to review your work, Julie! :)

[Troy Henson]

Your writes always make my heart skip a beat. The feeling of loving that special one...yes its always been them but ive also had that feeling that its possibly one way.

This was a wonderful write.

Regards
Troy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Troy :) Julie

[Sophy Freebirds]

Sweet love poem... the uncertainity of the person over the reciprocation of love is well depicted.. and the willingness to submit heart,mind and soul - Let it be me... ;) Amazing feeling invoked in the reader.

~Sophy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[s y e]

This is so beautiful Julie. You honestly take my to heaven with your sweet, romantic words. I'm in awe right now, you blow me away.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind, thank you : ) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

a soft and romantic, loving piece, with a wonderful style and flow.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie