It's Always Been You
A Poem by
MsJewel
~ a romantic scribble ~
art ~ desire by pino
It’s always been you…
rising with the dawn
cascading bright ribbons of light
warmly
around my heart
never paling with the moon
yet
leaving me longing for your kisses in the night
where dreams of you are a serenade,
a nightingales song,
beautiful and wild
and love is carved in hearts with roses…
you have picked the sweetest bouquet bound with my heartstrings
in this land of fantasy
yes,
it’s always been you,
let it be me
© 2014 MsJewel
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Such beautiful longing in this, it left me feeling a little sad. I don't know it may just be me. I feel the love, the passion, but it is as if it is unsure, searching, questioning if the other feels the same. I do know one thing maam--you always make me FEEL something when I read your works, and that to me is the sign of a great writer:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words April. :) Julie
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Such a beautiful write, very emotional. :-)
Kaze~
Posted 9 Years Ago
Such a beautiful write, very emotional. :-)
Kaze~
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you sweet lady! :) Julie
9 Years Ago
Your very welcome, Julie. :-)
Such deep emotion. Opening the heart to examination.
I always enjoy your poetry but this is in a class alone.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Such deep emotion. Opening the heart to examination.
I always enjoy your poetry but this is in a class alone.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I especially liked the line "and love is carved in hearts with roses'
a beautiful penned piece of exquisite poetry ..
Posted 10 Years Ago
I especially liked the line "and love is carved in hearts with roses'
a beautiful penned piece of exquisite poetry ..
Beautiful artwork and sweet words. Always a pleasure to fall into your words of passion and want. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
Beautiful artwork and sweet words. Always a pleasure to fall into your words of passion and want. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Yearning for your beloved hoping that they feel for you as you do for them.Another beauty Jules :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Yearning for your beloved hoping that they feel for you as you do for them.Another beauty Jules :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you sweet one! :) Julie
10 Years Ago
You are welcome :)
Let it be me. This was the sounding message in this whole piece. Always an honor to review your work, Julie! :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Let it be me. This was the sounding message in this whole piece. Always an honor to review your work, Julie! :)
Your writes always make my heart skip a beat. The feeling of loving that special one...yes its always been them but ive also had that feeling that its possibly one way.
This was a wonderful write.
Regards
Troy
Posted 10 Years Ago
Your writes always make my heart skip a beat. The feeling of loving that special one...yes its always been them but ive also had that feeling that its possibly one way.
This was a wonderful write.
Regards
Troy
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for your kind words Troy :) Julie
Sweet love poem... the uncertainity of the person over the reciprocation of love is well depicted.. and the willingness to submit heart,mind and soul - Let it be me... ;) Amazing feeling invoked in the reader.
~Sophy
Posted 10 Years Ago
Sweet love poem... the uncertainity of the person over the reciprocation of love is well depicted.. and the willingness to submit heart,mind and soul - Let it be me... ;) Amazing feeling invoked in the reader.
~Sophy
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
This is so beautiful Julie. You honestly take my to heaven with your sweet, romantic words. I'm in awe right now, you blow me away.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is so beautiful Julie. You honestly take my to heaven with your sweet, romantic words. I'm in awe right now, you blow me away.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
You are very kind, thank you : ) Julie
a soft and romantic, loving piece, with a wonderful style and flow.
Posted 10 Years Ago
a soft and romantic, loving piece, with a wonderful style and flow.
10 Years Ago
Thank you :) Julie
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MsJewel The Beach, CA
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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
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