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It's Always Been You

It's Always Been You

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic scribble ~

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art ~ desire by pino

 

 

It’s always been you…

 

rising with the dawn

cascading bright ribbons of light

                       warmly

                               around my heart

 

never paling with the moon

 

yet

leaving me longing for your kisses in the night

where dreams of you are a serenade,

                      a nightingales song,

           beautiful and wild

and love is carved in hearts with roses…

you have picked the sweetest bouquet bound with my heartstrings

                                     in this land of fantasy

 

yes,

           it’s always been you,

 

                                         let it be me

© 2014 MsJewel


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Such beautiful longing in this, it left me feeling a little sad. I don't know it may just be me. I feel the love, the passion, but it is as if it is unsure, searching, questioning if the other feels the same. I do know one thing maam--you always make me FEEL something when I read your works, and that to me is the sign of a great writer:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words April. :) Julie



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Such a beautiful write, very emotional. :-)

Kaze~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

9 Years Ago

Thank you sweet lady! :) Julie
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome, Julie. :-)
Such deep emotion. Opening the heart to examination.
I always enjoy your poetry but this is in a class alone.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I especially liked the line "and love is carved in hearts with roses'

a beautiful penned piece of exquisite poetry ..

Posted 10 Years Ago


Beautiful artwork and sweet words. Always a pleasure to fall into your words of passion and want. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
Yearning for your beloved hoping that they feel for you as you do for them.Another beauty Jules :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you sweet one! :) Julie
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Let it be me. This was the sounding message in this whole piece. Always an honor to review your work, Julie! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Your writes always make my heart skip a beat. The feeling of loving that special one...yes its always been them but ive also had that feeling that its possibly one way.

This was a wonderful write.

Regards
Troy

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words Troy :) Julie
Sweet love poem... the uncertainity of the person over the reciprocation of love is well depicted.. and the willingness to submit heart,mind and soul - Let it be me... ;) Amazing feeling invoked in the reader.

~Sophy

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie
This is so beautiful Julie. You honestly take my to heaven with your sweet, romantic words. I'm in awe right now, you blow me away.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are very kind, thank you : ) Julie
a soft and romantic, loving piece, with a wonderful style and flow.

Posted 10 Years Ago


MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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