Because You Love Me...

~ a romantic scribble ~

aleksey marina photography

 

 

My dreamy pen dances through meadows

on a graceful breeze of sunbeams and pastel daydreams

forgiving the clouds,

            tickling the rainbows

                       teasing the flowers,

            scattering sweet petals

    like butterflies fluttering

with romance on their wings..

 

I am a song,

               I am sonnet

composed with the joy of a summer day

because

               you love me

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow MS Jewel this is Beautiful But I am Speechless
for words with this piece I am in love with the poem WOW well
quite the Inspiration here.


Simply Beautiful is all I can say thank you for this Lovely piece
and thank you for your kind review and comments on my page.



WOW!

My dreamy pen dances through meadows

on a graceful breeze of sunbeams and pastel daydreams

forgiving the clouds,

tickling the rainbows

teasing the flowers,

scattering sweet petals

like butterflies fluttering

with romance on their wings..




Blessings. kindred poet

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your lovely comment and thrilled you enjoyed this poem. Thank you :) Julie

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. I Enjoyed this read very much. blessings. kindred poet

[redzone]

Those butterflies are forever spreading love whereever they go... I only go out at night Julie, can't be too careful with those winged beauties flying around.. tsk tsk, seems they caught you Julie ;0)
Or someone has... lol I hope you know I love the way you write and express your feelings in your poems, in this one I felt that summer breeze.. oh my this love thing isnt contagious is it???
~~redzone

[MsJewel]

I think it may be contagious...now put on some sunglasses and go outside and catch some butterflies! Hugs, Julie

[redzone]

Yes maam!!

[Sami Khalil]

When you stroll the meadows, they feel loved and when you caress the sweet petals, they feel cherished. Your pen walks along your path of joy...Excellent...:)..............

[MsJewel]

Your comments are poetry! Hugs, Julie

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)...................

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOW and you call me a romantic, your poetry isn't for me and it still melts my heart. A breathtaking little poem…

I am a song,
I am sonnet
composed with the joy of a summer day

love that part.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Why it was so my pleasure Julie :)

[adreamer]

You are very talented when it come to writing affairs of the heart so beautifully Julie.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry. Hugs, Julie

[Ma'at]

this is so daydreamy and pretty, i love the picture and the style you wrote it in, very romantic! you're a great writer
-GS

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment and compliment :) Julie

[AprilRN1210]

Your pen is dreamy ma'am. Everything about this is beautiful: from the gorgeous picture to the color of the font, to the visual construction of the piece, to the sentiment contained. You just tickled my heart .... Keep scattering your romantic scribbles across my screen because I love it.

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoy my little scribbles. Thank you for visiting today :) Julie

[AprilRN1210]

It is always a delight girl.

[Forest Green]

Sweet sprite, happiness is a moving concept, or reality that can be centered around another. It's tantalizing when it happens.

Your poem breathes optimism. Nicely done.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie