Because You Love Me...

~ a romantic scribble ~

aleksey marina photography

 

 

My dreamy pen dances through meadows

on a graceful breeze of sunbeams and pastel daydreams

forgiving the clouds,

            tickling the rainbows

                       teasing the flowers,

            scattering sweet petals

    like butterflies fluttering

with romance on their wings..

 

I am a song,

               I am sonnet

composed with the joy of a summer day

because

               you love me

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow MS Jewel this is Beautiful But I am Speechless
for words with this piece I am in love with the poem WOW well
quite the Inspiration here.


Simply Beautiful is all I can say thank you for this Lovely piece
and thank you for your kind review and comments on my page.



WOW!

My dreamy pen dances through meadows

on a graceful breeze of sunbeams and pastel daydreams

forgiving the clouds,

tickling the rainbows

teasing the flowers,

scattering sweet petals

like butterflies fluttering

with romance on their wings..




Blessings. kindred poet

[MsJewel]

I'm humbled by your lovely comment and thrilled you enjoyed this poem. Thank you :) Julie

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're very welcome. it's my pleasure always. I Enjoyed this read very much. blessings. kindred poet

[Madalyn Beck]

Wow! Reading this was like a dream! Beautiful imagery here. You are the queen of romantic writes in my book, dear. Keep scribbling them across my heart. With you, I feel I get a taste of what love should be. Fantastic! xo :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Latifa]

I am a song,
I am sonnet
composed with the joy of a summer day
because
you love me
love those lines , wonderfully written

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Ayushi]

"I am a song,
I am sonnet
composed with the joy of a summer day
because
you love me"
You are a master of conveying feelings and emotions beautifully :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Daydreamer]

Wow. Special portray indeed of celebrating knowing how much you're loved.
❤❤❤

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Moonie]

I enjoyed the poem greatly. From the visual effects the poem offered to the fuchsia font. "Pastel daydreams" is an amazing phrase. I wonder why didn't I think of that...;))
Thank you for bringing this poem to my attention, ma'am.
-moon's fairest daughter

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment :) Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... Breeze of sunbeams and day dreams...
Your poem is a bouquet of emotions delicately
penned in your romantic sonnet. truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

Thank you my dear friend. When are you going to start posting here again? I miss your gorgeous poetry. Hugs, Julie

[Patricia Wedel]

Julie... come back... I miss you and your romantic poetry... truly, Pat xo

[Trace]

This isn't a poem.......
It's an emotion. .... a feeling expressed from a heart all aflutter
It is sensual and spiritual
And pure.

And it couldn't be prettier ....

It speaks of a feeling we all wish to experience....

The joyous pleasures of being loved.

Beautiful my dear friend.
Trace.

[MsJewel]

Thank you handsome. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, Julie

[Trace]

It made me smile....
You don't mind dimples do you?

[MsJewel]

I love dimples :)

[A. Amos]

Beautiful reading your poem make me feel the magic of love...bravo!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this little scribble. Thank you :) Julie

[A. Amos]

You''re most welcome, value your self your a great writer and woulld love to read your book...

[MsJewel]

You are very kind...I wish I had a book for you to read. Perhaps one day... :) Julie

[A. Amos]

Looking forward...

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Whenever I read your poems, I stray in a dream. Your pen is like a flower itself. However, I have one suggestion: the last two lines: "because you love me" can be made more poetic. Maybe you can change it to "Because my heart has blossomed with your love." Either way, it's still a splendid poem. Thank you.

[MsJewel]

That would be a lovely ending Gleb..I'll consider changing it - or I may just borrow that line for another poem...if you don't mind of course. Hugs, Julie