Until...

~ goodbye isn't always forever ~

art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

Free my hair upon your pillow
in a quiet golden storm
Kiss the teardrops from the clouds
until the rain is warm

and let it fall, soft as a whisper
of silk upon the skin
With each breath keep my embrace

           until we meet again

Dream our dream without an ending
like an unfinished song
Hear the winds echo forever
and know it wont be long
for silver moons to shine once more
on this gentle hurricane
Find my heart your safe harbor

          until we meet again

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

This is stunning! The flow and gentle nature of the words that dance along seamlessly to create this beautiful piece is masterful. It's an effortless read nd one that has captivated me and my imagination of what true love surely is.

Very nice.

Regards
Troy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words! :) Julie

[Papatunde]

Another amazing poem..... peaceful and vivid.. You are an amazing poet

[MsJewel]

I appreciate your kind words :) Julie

[Ayushi]

Wonderful write..
Calm, peaceful and romantic :)
I loved the lines
"Find my heart your safe harbor
until we meet again"

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you :)) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Soft and gentle memory can make us wish and hope for more. You create good vision of a new meeting and possibilities. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry. Always a pleasure to read your word.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your encouraging words. :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

The pleasure was mine :))

[Ink-stained Hands]

This poem is lovely. "With each breath keep my embrace until we meet again". I could feel that this poem really comes from the heart. The words were all beautifully weaved together. Ahhh, I love this!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

A very romantic and sensual poem, with a touch of longing. Lovely work.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[wordman]

Julie you are certainly a romantic

[MsJewel]

As are you my sweet friend :) Julie

[icelandicblue]

This is the whole romantic package. It is soft and sweet and so perfectly inviting:

Free my hair upon your pillow
in a quiet golden storm

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Now THAT'S a romantic poem. Not erotic, romantic. There's a difference

[MsJewel]

Thank you BR :) Julie

[KWP]

You bring the romance of life back to the moments, your words melt as they permeate within to bubble back out in a new for of hope and love ... really nice xx

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[adreamer]

This is such an emotional piece of your heart expressed so beautifully as you only know how too, you truly have a very romantic side of you it always show up in your writing. :)Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry :) Julie