Until...

~ goodbye isn't always forever ~

art ~ arthur braginsky

 

 

Free my hair upon your pillow
in a quiet golden storm
Kiss the teardrops from the clouds
until the rain is warm

and let it fall, soft as a whisper
of silk upon the skin
With each breath keep my embrace

           until we meet again

Dream our dream without an ending
like an unfinished song
Hear the winds echo forever
and know it wont be long
for silver moons to shine once more
on this gentle hurricane
Find my heart your safe harbor

          until we meet again

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

This is stunning! The flow and gentle nature of the words that dance along seamlessly to create this beautiful piece is masterful. It's an effortless read nd one that has captivated me and my imagination of what true love surely is.

Very nice.

Regards
Troy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words! :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

god, your poetry is so beautiful, so lyrical..

what else can i see...it's a breath of fresh air...a rainbow after a storm.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie

[Ladysue]

yes, until..until we meet again..love those first lines..so beautiful..exquisite Julie..

[MsJewel]

Thank you lovely lady! :) Julie

[Fran Marie]

so very lovely in poetic verse...reads like a love song...soft and lyrical

nicely donE!!l

[MsJewel]

Thank you. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Such a sweet and lovely and gently written piece Jules.Your writings always leave me smiling :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweet friend. Your comments always leave me with a smile :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Stephen]

Yeah ... how true ~~~ Well said, Julie. Yeah, "Goodbye`s not always forever" like a "Past or some memories can`t be vanished into the ashes forever." I can feel the deep warmed sensations of the write. Julie, I must say, that you`ve got a very sexy (Beautiful and positive) thinking about love, the strawberry flavor of yous with your tender heart`s all what making you precious around the whole world ~~~ with the kind thoughts of yous. Very beautiful poem, once again .. you won my heart penning down such kinda deep thoughts. All lines`re my fav. even you know what? This write`s one of my favorites indeed because I always believed, "The emotions make the stuffs beautiful ~~ with the harmony to beloved!!" Wonderful write!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Stephen. :) Julie

[Trace]

Wow,,, Wow,,, Wow.

This reads like a fairytale.
so soft and and sensual
and so so pretty.

I just love The last two lines
they anchor the whole poem into something special.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. Your comments mean so much to me. I adore you. Hugs, Julie

[David Scott]

I wrote a poem with the same title, but it reads much differently.
This was a fond wish and a gentle calling.
Well done Julie.

[MsJewel]

I'm glad you enjoyed it David. Thank you for the friend request. I look forward to reading your poetry. - I'll look up Until... :) Julie

[David Scott]

Unpublished...
Not close to your work Julie.
Feel free to read or not.
I have hesitated to intrude into your circle of friends for some time as you are quite popular and I'm sure very busy.
I read who I like however and you are a very fine poet.
I do not recurve or send requests so you need never feel an obligation one way or the other.
I plan to review your a grouping of your poetry soon.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words and your lovely compliment. My poetry is very simple - really just litle scribbles or heartprints. I'm never too busy to make a new friend David!

[Daydreamer]

Stunning writing with dazzling metaphoric references!
I love your tone; it sounds friendly to the reader and the poems are always smooth
you pour your soul in poetry🎀🎀🎀🎀

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind and encouraging words :) Julie

[~]

Such a soft and delicate poem. The romantic kiss brushed upon this write is such a gorgeous image to behold. I truly loved this.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh the picture you paint with your words of romance are so breathtaking what a magnificent piece of poetry you have weaved.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my romantic friend! :) Julie