So Far Away

~ a romantic scribble ~

~ Paris Nights by Mark Spain ~

 

 

 

So far away

and yet

when the night is warm and the air is thick

and the motion of the breeze
gently

tickles my skin

…like your soft breath
on the nape of my neck…

oh oui mon amour

suddenly
you are here

 

and before I can focus

before I remember

 

my lips whisper

stay

 

…floating

like a secret

on the warm night air…

 

for a moment

I am yours

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

The longing for that someone special.....I am struggling with this every day. The chance to hear her voice, feel her touch is like a dream but a nightmare too. I close my eyes and see her and know that patience is what is needed if my love is so strong.

This is simply touching and resinates with me.

Regards
Troy

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt this piece Troy. Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie

[Troy Henson]

Its my pleasure. :)

[Gracious]

O this really had emotionally attached and definitely captured exactly what you were trying to say! Well done!

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Wow! French and everything. This is one hot poem.

[MsJewel]

merci mon doux ami! :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh my!...I felt the whisper...

This is when you know the writer has magic...
and indeed you do!!!

Gorgeous weaving of words, sweet Julie!~xoxo~:)

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet. Thank you for your wonderful comment and compliment. You are always so encouraging. :) Julie

[Trace]

Simply exquisite. !!!!!!!!!!

You know why I love this poem.

HUGGS. ....Trace

[MsJewel]

I do?....oh yes..I do...
Hugs, Julie

[Ambra Celeste]

When there is a strong connection between two people/lovers you can feel each other closeness on a soul level, I don't mean the feeling of missing someone but the power of feeling each other's essence. Deep meaning in this poem.

[MsJewel]

I agree Ambra. There is a connection that is unexplainable....Thanks so much for your lovely comment. :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I love this poem, amazingly written. :-)

Kaze~

[MsJewel]

Thank you Kaze :) Julie

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your,very welcome. :-)

[Addy]

I love the flow. It's quick and flighty just like the meaning of the poem. "For a moment i am yours"

[MsJewel]

Thank you Addy :) Julie

[Papatunde]

Ahh so amazing........ it lingers and grabs my attention instantaneously

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it! :) Julie

[KWP]

yes ... you took me there, i felt it, the breeze, my neck, the eternal energy of the moment where, just for a moment we understand that in fact, anything is possible

love it xx

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment! :) Julie