300 Love Poems Later...

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ ron discenza

 

 

300 love poems later…

 

my heart still flutters

               not with butterflies

but with an indefinable yearning

a perpetual hunger

that could only be satisfied

with your kiss ~ resting gently upon my lips

 

as soft as a dew kissed dawn

as light as a whisper of breath

                       held

        in the wake of a lacy moon

 

a kiss…your kiss

                        soft, light

yet with the unspoken magic

that defines the word rapture

spilling with passion from the pen

               of a poet…this poet

whose heart still flutters

not with butterflies

 

                   300 love poems later…

 

              

Reviews

[Trace]

It is amazing the journey you have taken
I have so enjoyed all the poetry you have shared along the way.
this has a touch of that trail.... a tale of love.
a poets heart expressed so brilliantly with the stroke of her pen.

The most amazing thing is that each and every poem you have written
is extraordinary in it's own right. (Write???)

I love how this poem isn't really about the 300 previous poems
but about how the love is still there.......
and probably always will be.

This goes to the top of my favorites list.

HUGGS. ...Trace

[MsJewel]

The memory of him will always stay in a very special place in my heart. ..and you, my dear friend, have a special place as well. LY Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie.

[Trace]

I just love your sentimental side.
it brings out your best poetry.
and.... Thank you my dear friend. The feelings are mutual.

[Chris Micha]

Who in the world is this guy you speak so fondly of, my goodness. Fabio?

Regardless, your inspiration is undeniable and it certainly shows through your writing.

Bravo miss Julie! :)

[MsJewel]

Fabio - LOL...no not my type..
:) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Gooood!! I always thought he looked like a muscled troll.

[MsJewel]

I'm more of a George Clooney girl..

[Lyn Anderson]

Hmm, I think this is lovely romantic verse. 300 poems seems like a long time. But with how much you write, it really isn't that long, is it? I jest. But that is the first thought that popped into my head :)

[MsJewel]

It sure feels like a long time... Thanks so much for your kind words :) Julie

[Saddam]

my heart still flutters
not with butterflies
but with an indefinable yearning.

Absolutely agree with dreamer2.. You are incredibly write such a lovely piece. Made readers speechless.

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet - thank you - :) Julie

[adreamer]

You always have incredible ways expressing thoughts and feelings for someone who has become your world to you Julie. Such a prefect / picture presentation as one compliment the other one so beautifully. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry. Have a lovely evening my friend :) Julie

[Rossen]

Two good writers sure can whip up a batch of desire...a breath taking story in it's self...
left so far apart two aching hearts...

Romance only breathes loves unfulfilled desire...x 300 sighs...
wonderfully expressed MJ,


Rossen

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

300 poems later, no more butterflies...they are gone now...but there is still the inky kisses that greet the lips of my pen...some kind of magic.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Jacob :) Julie