300 Love Poems Later...

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ ron discenza

 

 

300 love poems later…

 

my heart still flutters

               not with butterflies

but with an indefinable yearning

a perpetual hunger

that could only be satisfied

with your kiss ~ resting gently upon my lips

 

as soft as a dew kissed dawn

as light as a whisper of breath

                       held

        in the wake of a lacy moon

 

a kiss…your kiss

                        soft, light

yet with the unspoken magic

that defines the word rapture

spilling with passion from the pen

               of a poet…this poet

whose heart still flutters

not with butterflies

 

                   300 love poems later…

 

              

Reviews

[Trace]

It is amazing the journey you have taken
I have so enjoyed all the poetry you have shared along the way.
this has a touch of that trail.... a tale of love.
a poets heart expressed so brilliantly with the stroke of her pen.

The most amazing thing is that each and every poem you have written
is extraordinary in it's own right. (Write???)

I love how this poem isn't really about the 300 previous poems
but about how the love is still there.......
and probably always will be.

This goes to the top of my favorites list.

HUGGS. ...Trace

[MsJewel]

The memory of him will always stay in a very special place in my heart. ..and you, my dear friend, have a special place as well. LY Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie.

[Trace]

I just love your sentimental side.
it brings out your best poetry.
and.... Thank you my dear friend. The feelings are mutual.

[Fran Marie]

as soft as a dew kissed dawn

as light as a whisper of breath

held

in the wake of a lacy moon

a delicate soft flowing piece of art....truly exquisite!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Madalyn Beck]

What a journey... This is a stunning piece of art you have painted in words. You blow me away with these beautiful and exquisite writes!! :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[stars are far]

That was very beautiful.
I dont usually use the word "beautiful" but that is really beautiful.
well done :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you my lovely friend :) Julie

[Mel Lisa]

this was exquisite! The soft and tenderness of the words...just lovely! and the picture went well with the tone. This is one of my favorites:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Brianna Brie]

but with an indefinable yearning
a perpetual hunger
that could only be satisfied
with your kiss ~ resting gently upon my lips

Your words breath the desire. Oh, how I wish I could let go like other people. It seems that hunger can only be fulfilled by the one missing. Kudos!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[Siegfried]

Touchingly sensual, shadowy sensations, your poem is evidence of a well developed craft, complete with the wicking of desire's flame.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind words :) Julie

[Ladysue]

Julie, this is such a powerful poem in that it says love is here to stay even now. You have a beautiful way of phrasing your words and I love how you expressed them in this poem and I adore the title too. This poem speaks to me more than you know. You are true romantic writer.. stunning..

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind words. :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

It is like we never get enough from this thirst and hunger. Perpetual it seems as your writes...Bravo..............

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Sami :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...Any time...:).......................

[Tom]

There's someone for everyone and for those fortunate enough to find their true soulmate, love has no boundaries and they are truly blessed!

A feelgood romantic poem, penned with cultured panache and style!

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment Tom :) Julie