300 Love Poems Later...

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ ron discenza

 

 

300 love poems later…

 

my heart still flutters

               not with butterflies

but with an indefinable yearning

a perpetual hunger

that could only be satisfied

with your kiss ~ resting gently upon my lips

 

as soft as a dew kissed dawn

as light as a whisper of breath

                       held

        in the wake of a lacy moon

 

a kiss…your kiss

                        soft, light

yet with the unspoken magic

that defines the word rapture

spilling with passion from the pen

               of a poet…this poet

whose heart still flutters

not with butterflies

 

                   300 love poems later…

 

              

Reviews

[Trace]

It is amazing the journey you have taken
I have so enjoyed all the poetry you have shared along the way.
this has a touch of that trail.... a tale of love.
a poets heart expressed so brilliantly with the stroke of her pen.

The most amazing thing is that each and every poem you have written
is extraordinary in it's own right. (Write???)

I love how this poem isn't really about the 300 previous poems
but about how the love is still there.......
and probably always will be.

This goes to the top of my favorites list.

HUGGS. ...Trace

[MsJewel]

The memory of him will always stay in a very special place in my heart. ..and you, my dear friend, have a special place as well. LY Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Julie.

[Trace]

I just love your sentimental side.
it brings out your best poetry.
and.... Thank you my dear friend. The feelings are mutual.

[Ranger Kessel]

elegant. expressive. beautiful.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[FrancescaX]

it is so lovely.... and the imagery is uncanny...straight to the heart

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[PiaHelenMaria]

Julie, this is exquisitely beautiful. Your writing speaks the language of passion and honest devotion.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

The passion you obviously still feel and the dedication you have shown will surely be rewarded at heavens gates. They say true love never dies and think you are the epitome of an undying love.
Beautifully written.
Clive.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your sweet comment Clive. Have a beautiful day my friend :) Julie

[krilan]

This poem is so well worded and just beautiful. The imagery and details are perfect.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Gracious]

this is really a well-written poem,I applaud your use of imagery and the way you manipulate your vocabulary

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[MAC]

tis too late in the day to cry like this, amazingly penned dear friend.....300 poems later, undoubtedly he still feels your love from Heaven.

[willweb]

This poem is extremely soft and beautiful. A very light but a wonderful touch. I enjoyed this today

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[shawnt5604]

Beautiful, simply beautiful :) great write!

[MsJewel]

Thank you Shawn :) Julie