Open Windows

~ just a scribble ~

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Love

open the window of my soul

and lift the cloud of lace curtains

colorless in the mist of this rainy night

 

Look past the wishing well of tender memories

still echoing with each heartbeat

(filled with longing for you)

 

So I may reach out

and hold the hands of time

 

Remembering…

 

You

who taught me

with beauty and grace

 

“When your dreams like stars fall like rain from the sky,

dance in the rain

and tomorrow will bring sunshine and sweet daisies

if you listen to your heart”

 

Love changes everything….even from a distance

 

Yes my angel,

the window is open

~~~

Reviews

[Light and ashes]

"So I may reach out

and hold the hands of time


Remembering…


You

who taught me

with beauty and grace."

These lines added so much to the loveliness of this poem.
I would however make a suggestion.
In the lines that follow, I had a little confusion reading it.
I had to read it two or three times to make sense of it.
I would add a comma to sort out the confusion.

So it would read,

“When your dreams like stars,

fall like rain from the sky,

dance in the rain

and tomorrow will bring sunshine and sweet daisies

if you listen to your heart."

Overall, it was a lovely poem and I did enjoy reading.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow that was such a inspirational and spiritual poem…. Well we must love ourselves before we can truly love another or expect another to love us. Love is magical and when you find it the world is an open door.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Welcome, my words are a reflection of your wonderful work.

[Stephen]

Love`s got its own muses, it hears the sweet sounding possessions of hearts across the countries. Love`s a like drug ~~ a drug which never steals the nights but gives the new life to each & every persona trampling into the sands of ..? Love! Very beautiful poem. Your work always makes my day. It`s an excellent job as usual :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Stephen. :) Julie

[Trace]

Forever leave that window open and your heart will be available to give and receive love.

What a beautiful free verse.

Love it and you.

Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. I love you too. :) Julie

[adreamer]

I can tell it come from deep within you Julie, it echoes the windows of your soul so beautifully and it is so heartfelt too. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

This is gorgeous, and could be for some one far away or someone who has passed. It is a wonderful write.

[Rossen]

Poets in love flowing in silken ink and traveling dreams...sweet 100/100

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie

[redzone]

Sometimes Julie, I read your poems and wonder is it dreams that fall like rain, or is it the wonderful images that dance in my head??? Is it the wishing well of tender memories, or is it that you make time stand still?? I think even with the windows open, you must invite love in... Julie, I am always in awe of the way you write.
~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Curt, thank you for the lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[Shaquana Adams]

You write so well. I love this poem :) So well expressed!
-QuanaWana

[MsJewel]

Thank you Shaquana :) Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love does change everything if we open our windows and let it in...when dreams fall from the sky like rain i do believe we should dance within them...

rain doesn't hurt...and we could maybe splash our dreams into fruition.

you write "love" so well.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment Jacob :) Julie