Open Windows

~ just a scribble ~

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

 

Love

open the window of my soul

and lift the cloud of lace curtains

colorless in the mist of this rainy night

 

Look past the wishing well of tender memories

still echoing with each heartbeat

(filled with longing for you)

 

So I may reach out

and hold the hands of time

 

Remembering…

 

You

who taught me

with beauty and grace

 

“When your dreams like stars fall like rain from the sky,

dance in the rain

and tomorrow will bring sunshine and sweet daisies

if you listen to your heart”

 

Love changes everything….even from a distance

 

Yes my angel,

the window is open

~~~

Reviews

[light and ashes]

"So I may reach out

and hold the hands of time


Remembering…


You

who taught me

with beauty and grace."

These lines added so much to the loveliness of this poem.
I would however make a suggestion.
In the lines that follow, I had a little confusion reading it.
I had to read it two or three times to make sense of it.
I would add a comma to sort out the confusion.

So it would read,

“When your dreams like stars,

fall like rain from the sky,

dance in the rain

and tomorrow will bring sunshine and sweet daisies

if you listen to your heart."

Overall, it was a lovely poem and I did enjoy reading.

[Einstein Noodle]

oh my goodness dear Lady! how i miss you posting anew .. just happened to catch this old one of yours and as always .. i want to be that guy ;)))))))))))) such a profound beauty in the mood and scene . the pic is spectacular as a match with your words ... open the window ..lift the veil .. oh ... i just love that .. you are so sensuous and classy and full of romance ... you make a believer of me dear and wonderful friend... love truly is a wonderful thing ;)
E.

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

The window of heart is open to give and receive- wonderful words- feel the fresh air cool breeze and the smell of rain falling in torrents Of blessings- wonderful 🌹

[MsJewel]

Thanks so much :) Julie

[Laurierose]

This is simply lovely. The use of simile and metaphor was well developed here. The imagery felt real to the touch as well. Beautiful. Great read.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[rowan.taylorrr]

this is such a beautiful piece! well well done

[MsJewel]

thank you for your kind words :) Julie

[SmittyJas]

True blessing comes from your soul love letters of the mind open ones heats to the possibility love strike the could amount to a lifetime of love and desires of the heart full filled in motions of the night when Love it granted a kiss and a few wishes the holds on in the middle of the evening into the dawns early light lovers hold tight to memories of a romantic heart.

[Blue]

Your poems are always sweet delights, Julie. Your words fill my heart with beauty and grace.

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[David Scott]

I really like this poem.
It reminds me of, "So it Rains".
You have a way with penning love and a fond remembering.
Yes, there is a sadness, but my favorite part is the open window at the end...
Very lovely. My favorite of yours so far.

[Gracious]

Thank you so much for this :) It was so well written and delicately phrased. I"m really glad I got the chance to read this

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Happy hours]

Ms Jewel
for your "open windows"
Only one word
"Speechless"

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie