Paint the Sky

~ just a little scribble ~

 

art ~ elena dudina

 

 

~~~

Somewhere beyond a dream

he paints the sky a velvet amethyst

 

sailing above the rocks and sand

above the trembling ocean

 

A breath through my window…bathed in moonlight

 

Whispering…

“Wake my sweet angel”

 

And I awaken,

for his voice is the blue bird song

in a music box of beautiful memories

 

a lullaby

to soothe my soul

the poetry

within two hearts forever intertwined

 

I take this hand that holds my heart

for it is warm and it is strong

and he is unforgettable

 

And for a moment in time

we paint the sky

 

…somewhere beyond a dream

~~~

Reviews

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

The etherial images this piece conveys in the mind are haunting. Dreams can help us to live better in the real world. The security you felt when you were together is rising within your dreams to keep you feeling safe and contented.
You express love in so many ways that I don't think many of us have reached that level.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment my sweet friend. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful weekend. :) Julie

[stars are far]

That was very amazing.. well done

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Ruth]

I really enjoy your writing love...its aura adds a sparkle to my day :) x

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled my scribbles add a sparkle to your day. Thank you for your lovely comments. I appreciate you :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

"And I awaken,
for his voice is the blue bird song
in a music box of beautiful memories

a lullaby
to soothe my soul
the poetry
within two hearts forever intertwined"

The sleeping beauty awakens the beast in all of us and soothes the nocturnal complexities. In my library...:).................

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind words Sami :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)........................

[Shaquana Adams]

And for a moment in time
we paint the sky

…somewhere beyond a dream

Beautiful scribble. I really enjoyed this poem. This one is a favorite! ^-^
-QuanaWana

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Thank you my sweet friend. :) Julie

[Chris Micha]

Amazing!!!!!!!

Yet you do it again. Take me on a ride that I don't want to get off of. You are simply an artist!!! :)

[MsJewel]

You are too kind..Hugs, Julie

[kitty cat]

nice poem girl, love it, great job

[MsJewel]

Thank you sweetie! :) Julie

[kitty cat]

your welcome

[Roger Turgeon]

"Velvet amethyst" now that's a sky worth dreaming about, a sky that sets the mood for the soothing softness to follow.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your kind comment Roger :) Julie

[La Luna]

"And for a moment in time
we paint the sky
…somewhere beyond a dream"
A truly powerful piece with so many raw emotions, i loved every line, well done :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I always get the feeling of gliding through Nirvana, when I read your art, Julie..
This is no exception...
Spectacular write, sweet friend!~xoxo~:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Robbie. Have a beautiful day! Hugs, Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

My pleasure...and you too, lovely Julie!
(((hugs))) xxxx :)

[vaishnavi]

Whispering…
“Wake my sweet angel”

And I awaken,
for his voice is the blue bird song
in a music box of beautiful memories

a lullaby
to soothe my soul
the poetry
within two hearts forever intertwined


these lines are my favorite
really verrry lovely poem

[MsJewel]

I so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the lovely comment :) Julie

[vaishnavi]

your welcome