You Are Lovely

 

art ~ "Warmth" by Vidan

 

 

You came to me

            like April

                    slow and sweet

 

The breeze through my curtains

embracing my spirit like some sweet balm

the freshness of which never fades, but rises

like the quickening of senses

that finds me

              where spring and lovers meet

the perfume of passion

catching the light, weightless,

         whirling golden in the sun

with the taste and the voice of love…

whispering words,

               poetic words,

                        words wet with your sweetness

          honey tongued and soft with desire

 

I drink from your lips

a breath of beauty

                   your beauty

                            forever etched upon my promised heart

                                      and you are lovely

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

"You came to me
like April
slow and sweet"

Well that drew me in straight away and of course the beautiful photo. I knew I was going to be in for a treat when MsJewel picks up her golden pen to weave her magic on the the page!
Thank you for submitting this beauty to my contest and good luck!
Helena

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Helena and for the opportunity to submit to your contest :) Julie

[Helen Crutchett]

You are most welcome anytime Julie!

Helena

[Richard🖌]

You make reading a tender pleasure! : )

[Chris Micha]

This was like sitting amongst Magnolia trees breathing in their sweet perfume. It was intense with a subtle touch from your pen. Truly an amazing piece in which I could find myself lost in. Bravo!!

[MsJewel]

I am humbled by your wonderful comment. Thank you Christian :) Julie

[s y e]

This poem is lovely, you my friend, are lovely - this poem as a whole is just stunning.

// the perfume of passion
catching the light, weightless,
whirling golden in the sun
with the taste and the voice of love… //

I loved these lines, they just speak volumes. Such a romantic poem, you are quite the romantic, Julie.

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. Hugs, Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

"I drink from your lips
a breath of beauty"
A beautiful poem for Spring and love. It is good when they can meet. The words were tender and true. You led the reader to a very good ending. Always a pleasure to read your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my kind friend. :) Julie

[wordman]

where spring and lovers meet great line great write

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[stars are far]

wow..that was so amazing..
i loved that

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is a real gem, a very lovely poem I have read tonight, Ms. J. Isn't it a wonderful feeling when someone tells you that you are lovely?

Well-done!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your writing is always so sweet and exactly lovely Jules.:)

[CoraZanini]

"And you are lovely" - simple and pure as that. I like it a lot. And for the record you are unique- your style of writing.I enjoyed :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment :) Julie