You Are Lovely

 

art ~ "Warmth" by Vidan

 

 

You came to me

            like April

                    slow and sweet

 

The breeze through my curtains

embracing my spirit like some sweet balm

the freshness of which never fades, but rises

like the quickening of senses

that finds me

              where spring and lovers meet

the perfume of passion

catching the light, weightless,

         whirling golden in the sun

with the taste and the voice of love…

whispering words,

               poetic words,

                        words wet with your sweetness

          honey tongued and soft with desire

 

I drink from your lips

a breath of beauty

                   your beauty

                            forever etched upon my promised heart

                                      and you are lovely

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

"You came to me
like April
slow and sweet"

Well that drew me in straight away and of course the beautiful photo. I knew I was going to be in for a treat when MsJewel picks up her golden pen to weave her magic on the the page!
Thank you for submitting this beauty to my contest and good luck!
Helena

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Helena and for the opportunity to submit to your contest :) Julie

[Helen Crutchett]

You are most welcome anytime Julie!

Helena

[Richard🖌]

You make reading a tender pleasure! : )

[Saddam]

whispering words,
poetic words,
words wet with your sweetness
honey tongued and soft with desire
I drink from your lips
a breath of beauty
your beauty.

I think you have described your quality in poetic form. Amazing. Your specility is your simpleness. Great.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Trace]

Honey tongued and soft with desire.

I love this poem and this line really stands out as my favorite.

Beautifully written my friend.

HUGGS. ..Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you for supporting my poetry Trace. I appreciate you and your friendship more than you know. Hugs, Julie

[icelandicblue]

Another gorgeous piece from your sultry pen. You had me at:
You came to me

like April

slow and sweet

A poem of renewal and rejuvenation with every word and image.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[AYVID N]

A poem filled with golden hues of light, the light of love, in all it's amazing beauty, purity and passion. Sometimes, it's unbelieveable how much beauty can be created by a few strokes of an amazing poet's pen. Please accept my heartfelt appreciation for this poem.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day :) Julie

[AYVID N]

Thank you so much. I am having a great morning. :)

[Lyn Anderson]

the form, font, and image with this poem go together beautifully to complete an effective verse

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

Your poetry always makes me sigh and smile. Beautiful work.

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

I always feel like I'm having a mad romance in Tahiti when I read these types of poems from you. I live in Florida so Tahiti isn't much of a stretch. Great poem Jewel

[MsJewel]

A mad romance - how lovely! I think you may have inspired another poem....:) Julie

[redzone]

"where spring and lovers meet".... won't repeat what everyone has already said about this poem.. instead can I just ask for the directions to this place where spring and lovers meet... it's been way too loooooooong since I have seen spring and : "poetic words,
words wet with your sweetness
honey tongued and soft with desire... except in dreams...
and today was perhaps the first, best day of spring so far... wonderful poem Julie
~~redzone

[MsJewel]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Here's to many more beautiful spring days for you! :) Julie

[adreamer]

:) I love how soft and beautifully your words flow together in this one. They say cream always rises to the top you show that it dose in this one :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your sweet comment Larry :) Julie

[Anand Sehgal]

where spring and lovers meet

the perfume of passion

catching the light, weightless,

whirling golden in the sun

with the taste and the voice of love…

whispering words,

poetic words,

words wet with your sweetness

honey tongued and soft with desire


you have penned awesome, precious, feathery words :)
so tasty, so mellifluous, so fluent :)

Love you :)
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[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one. Have a beautiful day! :) Julie