Time is Nowhere

~ just a little love scribble ~

 

 

photography ~ Dimitri Caceaune

 

 

~~~

With a kiss he thaws the sleeping snow

and fantasy finds springtime

days are warm,

nights warmer still

we dance among the fireflies

heart's aglow

naked to the naked moon

and in the brilliance of its crest

time is nowhere...

~~~

Reviews

[cycy]

dreamy, natural, beautiful, enchanting, lovely and altogether everything wonderful, yes yet another miss Julie classic. put them all in a book, make a gigantic collection and il be sure to buy that one, these are the poems that remind you what poetry is truelly all about, you have a rare and uniquely beautiful way of writing darling, keep on :) :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie

[s y e]

When you are with someone who you love so much it is like time has stopped, like you have all the time in the world with them, it's magical. I loved this one.

Spectacular!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thanks for the great comment :) Julie

[Dhaye]

Fantastic! Indeed when you're with a special someone, it's like time is not running, everything is suspended and only your own heartbeats are what you can hear.

It's amazing to be in love. I like this a lot. Nice choice of image, too. =)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Dhaye :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Sigh. Lovely poem Jewel. Spring is just around the corner

[MsJewel]

Thank you BR :) Julie

[DrD]

Thje prime elements of good poetry have found a home here. Metaphor, profound concept and a lyrical pace all make this an excellent read. Well done

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie

[Neon]

Whao .. am glad to read your stuffs once again. I just visited the site for a while so thought to read my friend's stuffs :) this poem's very cool and it's what a beauty of the hearts you expressed through the pretty amazing words. All the usage of words's brilliant. Your stuffs are still as beautiful as before I'd read when I was on this site and enjoyed the journey with you all writers. Your still my fav. writer and best one across the country :)

O' by the way, I love that beautiful angel sitting in a white angelic dress over the grass thinking and dreaming of me. Hahaha! :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very sweet comment. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie

[Neon]

It's been a pleasure to me to be on your pages always. Am honored to have such a friend as you, thanks for being my preetiest friend. Keep writing, my blessings are always with you. I know, your already very talented, you don't need my blessings but I wish you from the depth of my heart, May you get published as soon as possible to you :)

[Michael G. Smith]

A very dream induced poem.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Chris Micha]

A beautiful ode to spring, but also to love. Love is timeless and that's what struck me most. Amazing! :)

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Christian. Thank you :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful photo and words.
"we dance among the fireflies
hearts aglow
naked to the naked moon"
The above lines dance in my head. I danced in the moonlight once. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[wordman]

you painted a lovely picture of spring

happy easter

[MsJewel]

Happy Easter Ron :) Julie

[adreamer]

You always paint this time of year so beautifully Julie, you always had a beautiful love for this time of year. :) Larry

[MsJewel]

Thank you Larry. Hugs, Julie