It Was There

It Was There

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a romantic scribble ~

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arantza sestayo art

 

 

 

Love came softly

           like the mist in a dream

      as quiet as a breeze

as graceful as a stream

of flowers

               cascading

                         gently through the air

 

         So silent…

                I didn’t know it was there

 

As the breeze blew stronger

each petal on the ground

                      started to scatter

             still without a sound

      leaving just the mist

                       of dreams

                                to take me where

 

Love came softly…

                  but I believe it was there

© 2014 MsJewel


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Smiled and then thought, where was I when love came? Was it here or there? Anywhere?? Then I thought ohno I'm one of those who need to be smacked upside the head to know he's in love or loved. Hopeless Julie, tsk tsk. I think if it weren't for your little romantic scribbles (as well as a few others) I wouldn't even know what love is anymore. And you make it feel so wonderful...~~redzone



Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment and compliment Curt. I'm thrilled you enjoy my scribbles. Hugs,.. read more



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Sometimes love sneaks up on us.Surprising us into realizing it was there right in front of us all along :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you :) julie
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Never expected..but arrived..
Lovely, descriptive, gentle..

Well done Julie.
Scotty

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

You're welcome Princess..!!
S.

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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