Harvesting Roses

~ a love scribble ~

art ~ Richard Johnson

 

 

A heavenly paradise is that place

where roses bloom for the one whose love is innocent

like rosebuds in the fallen snow

         soft with verses

                     sweet with poetry

 

Gather the sweetness

and breathe me

             as I dream you

        and the night bleeds stars

glistening on the roses

as gracefully as the rain will fall in spring

tasting of dreams,

                     or is it my tears

as make believe and reality become one...

finding me, still...

                harvesting roses

 

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

as make believe and reality become one...
finding me, still...
harvesting roses

Great imagery of time and a heart that never forgets. Kudos!

[MsJewel]

Thanks again Brianna :) Julie

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a lovely flowing and romantic verse, and the form and font match well.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[Saddam]

A heavenly paradise is that place
where roses bloom for the one whose love
is innocent
like rosebuds in the fallen snow.

First verse made me crazy. I lost in imagination. Want to feel myself at your place. Want to met someone. Then suddenly reality comes on the way as big rock. I woke up from my dream...

or is it my tears
as make believe and reality become one...
finding me, still...
harvesting roses.

This is poetry.

[MsJewel]

You are too kind. I'm humbled by your wonderful review :) Julie

[Lydia Shutter]

The bittersweetness in between the lines drew me in. Absolutely enchanting romance in this write, Julie. Talk about sighs! The imagery is spectacular. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet Lydi. Thank you for supporting my poetry. Hugs, Julie

[s y e]

My little romantic poetess... you have me sighing and swooning here. This is so utterly romantic. Everything about this is total perfection.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. You are so kind. :) Julie

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Simply beautiful...What a way of portraying.. You know the perfect way..!!

Appreciate the same..

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

"Gather the sweetness

and breathe me

as I dream you"

I gather your romance is blooming in spring colors and sweetness. A blissful write...:).............

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sami. Spring is my favorite time of year. Happy Spring my sweet friend :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)....................

[Leigh]

The perfume of your roses is sweet and fills the air, but with so many lovely cut roses the only thing we can do is open a flower shop.

[MsJewel]

Let's do just that! Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are like sweet whispers into me hear. The poem is beautiful. A gentle flow of thoughts and find the woman harvesting roses. A very nice place to land. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie