Silence

~ a scribble ~

art ~ Elena Dudina ~ Dreamer

 

 

 

When breath is stilled and there is no light

                    save the moon

        peeking about the shadows

as softly as yesterday’s lullaby playing in my heart

 

                 and it is dark

 

As I long for the stars to shiver silver wishes

falling from the sky

to wrap me in the hope of tomorrow

 

                yet it is quiet

 

I will find comfort in the faintest whisper of my pen

fluttering on the wings of butterfly dreams

leaving rose petal kisses

               gently on my pillow

 

Reminding me

                  there is now

          and there is silence

                             but there is still

                                                   poetry

 

 

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

"There is silence but there is still poetry"- the whole message reflected here.Yes we don't need to be put out because life is gloomy still poetry lives in us..giving us a hope for tommorrow. Beautiful picture painted wi5h a deep allegorical meaning.:) touching poem Julie. ★ wishes and love★

~Sophy

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely words Sophy. Have a beautiful day :) Julie

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wish you the same :)

[Trace]

When we find ourselves alone or lonely
there is always that comfort of knowing
someone knows or shares the Same feelings and desires.

And there is always the calming and comforting words of a poem
to soothe our souls.

There is always poetry.

What a beautiful poem.

HUGGS. ...Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[Saddam]

silence...and poetry....and sad....all about end at one stage that is love. A passoin through silence to penned your pain at paper. Love this one.
Reminding me

there is now

and there is silence

but there is still

poetry

[MsJewel]

Thank you dear one! :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wonderfully penned my dear Julie :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[Jack...]

Never am I disappointed when I visit your beautiful world Julie. So very smooth and sweet is your poem today. Gorgeous work my friend.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jack :) Julie

[wordman]

and let the words flow as the moon lights the way

[MsJewel]

Thank you Ron :) Julie

[athena]

I do not know you but your poetry has told me a lot about you...romantic, thoughtful and classic. I really admire your work. it speaks directly to the soul. Your use of nature imagery reminds me of John Keats

[Baby Ricochet]

Sigh. Such a beautiful poem. I'm all a flutter.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt this one BR! :) Julie

[redzone]

This is beautiful Julie.. it sent "shiver silver wishes" into my night.. while I do appreciate stars, perhaps more is that each poem you write is warmer and brighter than stars... and Julie, they are never "silent".. is this a west coast thing?? nah, it's a Julie thing... be well my friend.. ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate you! :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

How very nice.
Soothing...refreshing..
Lovely gentleness.

Scott

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.........

[Sami Khalil]

In that silence you paint soft imagery and touching sentiments to your muse. You carry us on the wings of the soaring imagination. A wonderful work...:)................

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sami :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......................

[A. Amos]

Interesting piece of work thanks for sharing

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie