Seabirds, Lullabies and Fantasies

art ~ Garmash

 

 

 

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The seabirds have returned

filling the breeze with soft songs

and sweet melodies

 

A lullaby of love

warming the sky and teasing my heart

 

While just beyond reach

beyond the glimmering clouds

 where the ocean meets the sky

you shine…

 

paradise in loves pure light

 

I watch…from a distance

 

as memories like sunbeams

weave a tapestry of strawberry kissed yesterdays

and a sandcastle built for two…

 

“Dance with me, love

like the mist of the tide swept on the breeze

Love changes everything

when you listen to your heart”

 

I smile

 

the seabirds have returned

~~~

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Utterly romantic, a lullaby with a bit of strawberry dipped sass...

as memories like sunbeams
weave a tapestry of strawberry kissed yesterdays
and a sandcastle built for two…
Dance with me, love

Sigh....your returning seabirds warm'd my heart, just what I need on this chilly night,
going into my favorites toot sweet...it's blissful Julie :-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment. You're the best! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

You're the best, this is your forte Julie, and I've been waiting on you for forever to read my Rainbow silly, it's a take on your butterfly one. ;-)

[MsJewel]

I'm on my way now!

[Al R. Arce]

you hit a homerun here with "as memories like sunbeams weave a tapestry of strawberry kissed yesterdays and a sandcastle built for two…" That is your absolute best! So far...

[Trevor Barnett]

A very good write Julie! Your words are as warm like the sun you describe; and, the melody is as tranquil as the seabirds singing!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one Trevor. Thank you for the wonderful comment :) Julie

[ferousfinite]

Wwll done! I feel like I am missing some delicious wine and cheese with a beautiful lady like I should be the guy in this story... =)

[Blue]

Very beautiful. Makes me want to rush to the sea and watch seabirds. Haha. I always adore your words, Julie.

"Love changes everything
when you listen to your heart"

My favorite.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for the sea. Good to dance upon the beach and enjoy the day. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[Saddam]

as memories like sunbeams
weave a tapestry of strawberry kissed
Well well....the seabirds ara returned....to make my heart sing and time to joine them.
Exactly with my mind you write very well dear...
i love it.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... "strawberry kissed yesterday's" and
Lullabies of seabirds caressing your heart as
ocean waves sweep your lover's dreams into
your fantasies. A perfect poem for the evening
of Valentines. truly... with admiration and love...
Your friend... Pat

[s y e]

// as memories like sunbeams
weave a tapestry of strawberry kissed yesterdays
and a sandcastle built for two… //

Julie, you're so romantic, girl. This is beautiful as ever. That stanza totally captured my heart and put it in a box with a disposable key, aha.

Loved it!

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it my friend. Thanks for supporting my poetry :) Julie

[Linda alexander]

“Dance with me, love
like the mist of the tide swept on the breeze
Love changes everything
when you listen to your heart”
Great write, natural and without any exaggerations, enjoyed each lines

[MsJewel]

Thank you Linda! :) Julie

[Linda alexander]

You most welcome

[MAC]

okay going to try this again. this is written in such beauty and grace. the true definition of a romantic poem includes tragedy according to Nicholas Sparks. this is a just a wonderfully written piece laced in sad.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment Mark. It is always lovely to see you! :) Julie