Still

~ another little love scribble ~

art ~ Carrie Graber

 

 

 

If time could still…

 

…I think it could

for the day is quite still

nights are even quieter

 

still

being alone

doesn’t mean I’m lonely

 

it just means

I’d prefer to be with you

 

still

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the logic of your words. Many kinds of loneliness. Sometime being alone is needed and sometime we are waiting. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Exactly what I was thinking! :) Julie

[redzone]

"being alone doesn't mean I'm lonely"... we are never really alone, just perhaps without someone to share the closeness of a special love.. and this is not always forever... I felt your poem Julie, you have expressed it wonderfully... ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you Curt. It's always lovely to see you :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

Be still and still be with him...A sublime write...:).....................

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sami :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Brittany Zedalis]

being alone
doesn’t mean I’m lonely

You've said a lot in this small poem. I love it!

[MsJewel]

Thank you dear one! :) Julie

[Trace]

This says so much in just a few words.
the feeling of longing is powerfully expressed.

HUGGS.
Trace

[MsJewel]

I knew you would understand this one Trace. Hugs, Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i agree with coyote...the logic is right on...when i have been in between relationships...i have been alone but never feel lonely...and now i have that similar feeling in my long distance relationship...

but i only want one person...so i just bide time between visits.

could relate well to this exquisite short write.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jacob :) Julie

[Giggling Star]

Nicely penned. Just very, very nice :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you ! :) Julie

[A. Amos]

Feeling, love, loneliness you penned very well my friend in this beautiful write...

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Yes, exactly, you captured that feeling in so few words....brilliant Julie! ;-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Frieda :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

Sentimental splendor..
Loving and warm...this is so you..
Always a wonderful read..

Admiration.
Scott

[MsJewel]

Thank you Scott. I'm a little behind on my reading - just getting to your page! Hugs, Julie

[Scott Metro]

There is no hurry...a Princess should take her time.
....always.....