A Whisper

~ a little scribble ~

art ~ elizabeta Mozyro

 

 

Gently adrift upon a breeze

a whisper…

                  soft

                          …a soul at ease

Fair skies awake around your love

I reach for you and up above...

             Rainbows shimmer in love lit skies

                      painting the blue of teary eyes

         as sunbeams weave a golden thread

and flowers lift their sleepy heads

to find the clouds are puffs of lace

 

Beauty lines a tender face

 

As much as I wish you were here

when days turn cold,

                             when winter nears

I will find warmth in memories

that somehow keep you near to me

 

For when tears pass, although they stain

the beauty found is what remains

           forever etched upon my heart

                      when rainbows shine and clouds depart

 

And sometimes just the lightest sigh

a whisper…

                  soft

                         …fluttering by

       can take me back to days of spring

 

                                   My angel on gossamer wing?

Reviews

[Blue]

"For when tears pass, although they stain
the beauty found is what remains
forever etched upon my heart
when rainbows shine and clouds depart."

Your poems have that dreamlike quality that always have me charmed. I can't remember how many times I've told you that but well, I'm running out of good words to describe your writing style... :)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you for the wonderful comment. :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

Delicate...warm..soothing...
Flowers raise their sleepy heads...wonderful phrase..!!!
You give us such beauty..thank you.

Admiration
Scott

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet Scott. :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scotty...

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Julie... your art ties in so closely with the finale...
"My angel on gossamer wing?". I have penned your words
in my Journal... "painting the blue of teary eyes" rests
softly in my mind. "For when tears pass, although they stain...
the beauty found is what remains". Julie, this is a
beautiful love poem to cherish. truly... Pat

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Pat. There are those little whispers that bring back lovely memories when we least expect it. Whispers of love to you my dear friend Hugs, Julie

[Giggling Star]

Another sweetly beautiful poem from you Ms. Julie. The words are made of gossamer themselves. You must have such a beautiful soul to be able to find these words inside. I so admire your talent.

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet. Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. You have made my night Hugs, Julie

[Anand Sehgal]

For when tears pass, although they stain

the beauty found is what remains

forever etched upon my heart

you almost painted them. You are largely romantic :)
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[MsJewel]

Thank you Anand! :) Julie

[Jack...]

Julie, you always bring such beauty to this site. Your poetry flows so smoothly and softly to our eyes. Your rhyming is always spot on and your meter allows us to sing your poetry if we like. So melodically you pen, it seems effortless. The title is perfect as this does come as A Whisper. No one can whisper like you my friend.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Jack. Your comments always leave me with a smile :) Julie