A Whisper

~ a little scribble ~

art ~ elizabeta Mozyro

 

 

Gently adrift upon a breeze

a whisper…

                  soft

                          …a soul at ease

Fair skies awake around your love

I reach for you and up above...

             Rainbows shimmer in love lit skies

                      painting the blue of teary eyes

         as sunbeams weave a golden thread

and flowers lift their sleepy heads

to find the clouds are puffs of lace

 

Beauty lines a tender face

 

As much as I wish you were here

when days turn cold,

                             when winter nears

I will find warmth in memories

that somehow keep you near to me

 

For when tears pass, although they stain

the beauty found is what remains

           forever etched upon my heart

                      when rainbows shine and clouds depart

 

And sometimes just the lightest sigh

a whisper…

                  soft

                         …fluttering by

       can take me back to days of spring

 

                                   My angel on gossamer wing?

Reviews

[Blue]

"For when tears pass, although they stain
the beauty found is what remains
forever etched upon my heart
when rainbows shine and clouds depart."

Your poems have that dreamlike quality that always have me charmed. I can't remember how many times I've told you that but well, I'm running out of good words to describe your writing style... :)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you for the wonderful comment. :) Julie

[kublakhan27]

This is much more than a little scribble my friend...it's beautiful. Nicely done as always :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[ferousfinite]

A trickle of magic perhaps in all of us... your writing is unique!

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem.
"when winter nears
I will find warmth in memories
that somehow keep you near to me"
I like how the seasons make us wonder to the good days. We hope for the rebirth of love with the coming of the warm days of Spring. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Nusquam Esse]

A surprisingly beautiful poem, which floats ethereal just like the title, a whisper. I really like the way you format this poem, it is something I seem to have very little skill at. I would have never even considered splitting lines up with ... soft ... like you did here. It has a great effect, lingering on the mind. I love your last line, especially since you carried on that lingering effect by making it a question. You have a real knack for the art of poetry beyond the average writer; humbling really...

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. I appreciate it very much. I look forward to reading your poetry :) Julie

[cycy]

"I will find warmth in memories
that somehow keep you near to me"
this is a well composed poem, i enjoyed reading it and going through each line over again. very beautiful poem, well done.it also has that dreamy feel that's signature to most of your work and that just carries you into another world and just lifts you off the ground so to speak, the words just carry you off and you drift into a different place with the poem.

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you felt this one Cycy. I wrote it for someone very close to my heart. Have a beautiful day! :) Julie

[Mary]

beautiful poem

[Saddam]

when winter nears
I will find warmth in memories
that somehow keep you near to me
love it. no words for this.only love it.

[MsJewel]

Thank you dear one! :) Julie

[Trace]

The snow has started to fall here this evening but reading this fills me with an inner warmth.
Trace

[MsJewel]

Snuggle up sweetie! :) julie

[A. Amos]

Julie this one really work with watching snow around:) enjoyed it

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Made me a bit misty eye'd, soft whispering to someone with gossamer wings fluttering by. Sigh, it's lovely and you've touched my heart Julie, as always, but this one was extra special. x

[MsJewel]

Thank you Frieda. I'm glad you felt this one. Have a lovely evening my friend :) Julie

[Ruth]

This is just wonderful...I speak poetry when I read it and this flows from the tongue so softly and smoothly...absolutely remarkable x

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment Poppy. I appreciate you and your friendship :) Julie