A Whisper

~ a little scribble ~

art ~ elizabeta Mozyro

 

 

Gently adrift upon a breeze

a whisper…

                  soft

                          …a soul at ease

Fair skies awake around your love

I reach for you and up above...

             Rainbows shimmer in love lit skies

                      painting the blue of teary eyes

         as sunbeams weave a golden thread

and flowers lift their sleepy heads

to find the clouds are puffs of lace

 

Beauty lines a tender face

 

As much as I wish you were here

when days turn cold,

                             when winter nears

I will find warmth in memories

that somehow keep you near to me

 

For when tears pass, although they stain

the beauty found is what remains

           forever etched upon my heart

                      when rainbows shine and clouds depart

 

And sometimes just the lightest sigh

a whisper…

                  soft

                         …fluttering by

       can take me back to days of spring

 

                                   My angel on gossamer wing?

Reviews

[Blue]

"For when tears pass, although they stain
the beauty found is what remains
forever etched upon my heart
when rainbows shine and clouds depart."

Your poems have that dreamlike quality that always have me charmed. I can't remember how many times I've told you that but well, I'm running out of good words to describe your writing style... :)

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet. Thank you for the wonderful comment. :) Julie

[Al R. Arce]

Oh my dear lady how you toy with words!

[Valeigh Starr]

"And sometimes just the lightest sigh..." beautiful.

[MsJewel]

Thanks again Valeigh:) Julie

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Appreciate the way you write..

Keep Sharing!!

Good Wishes!!

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Devesh]

Ethereal and soothing. Indeed, the ones we love never truly leave us. Thanks for sharing! =)

[MsJewel]

I believe that as well. Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[Devesh]

You're most welcome. :)

[s y e]

Oh Julie, this is beyond beautiful! I cannot tell you how amazing this is and the beauty within your words. Simply divine as ever.

[MsJewel]

Thanks again! :) julie

[Rossen]

Seamless effortless and timeless a lullaby forever...

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[wordman]

sunbeams weave a golden thread was my fav great write enjoyed the read

[MsJewel]

Thank you ron :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

Soft, warm, etched with sadness, sighed in lightness of the spirit... A wonderful and touching poem....:)..........

[MsJewel]

Thank you Sami! :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........................

[Lydia Shutter]

A melancholy lullaby....so soft and filled with beautiful memories, Julie. The rhyme scheme is enchanting and the imagery is stunning. One to keep in my library. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you Lydi! Welcome Back! I've missed your gorgeous poetry. Hugs, Julie