Beauty Touching Beauty

~ a love poem ~

photograph by Gail Nagle

 

 

As soft
as a snowflake
twirls through the sky
falling with the whisper
of a lullaby


As light
as the white clouds
angels dance upon
with a sprinkle of dew
to paint a new dawn


As sweet
as a rosebud
will bloom in the spring
scented with sunshine
as butterflies wing


As bright
as a rainbow
so tenderly laced
with warm golden ribbons
in heavens embrace


As strong
as the tether
that tenderly ties
beauty touching beauty
I look in her eyes…

 

 

As pure

as the poetry

I had only dreamt of

etched in my heart gently

forever, she’s love

 

Author's Note

~ for hannah ~

Reviews

[Trace]

I have four sons, and one daughter,
A daughter is something special,
But the love we feel for all of our children is what poetry is made of.

However, you have such a beautiful way of expressing that love, that none can compare.
This is exquisite.

Love it, LY2. Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. They are poetry aren't they....I can't imagine my life without her...
Hugs, Julie

[R. L. Hill]

I want to meet Hannah if she inspired a poem such as this

[MsJewel]

She is amazing (but I'm sure all mom's feel that way). Thank you for your lovely comment :) Julie

[MAC]

Oh this is so beautiful....only a mother in love can release such emotions about a child, their child. Felt this and loved this one so much, had to go hug my daughter...twice then twice more.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Mark. Hug her and don't let her go = they grow up way, way too fast. :) Julie

[Jack...]

Breathtaking Julie. Something so very soft as your poetry combined with the wonder that is Hannah. A tiny bloom adding so much more beauty to your garden. Lovely...

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend! :) Julie

[A. Amos]

I can sense your feelings your lve oozing out of every single word, she is lucky to have you:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you, but I think I'm the lucky one! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Oh my, this is gorgeous Julie, you've touched my heart here, in so many ways. Can't say enough, this wafts through the soul on so many delightful levels. Sigh....that is truly unconditional love my sweet friend.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Frieda. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful evening and by the new pic, it looks like you are!!! :) Julie

[Frieda P]

Ha ha that's my son, it's an older pic, he took me out for my 40th birthday, blahblahbah years ago, it's one of my favorites. ;-) You're welcome and you enjoy your night too!

[MsJewel]

It is a lovely picture!

[Frieda P]

Thank you! :-)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

"forever, she's love," this has a masterful and loving flow, great writing.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Saddam]

My bhatiji (niece) is not here, she is with he maternal grandma but your poetry remind me her beautiful voice, beautiful face, now I'm talking with her. thanks for this.

[MsJewel]

Thank y9u my very sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[Saddam]

hugs too dear...you are welcome.

[wordman]

you painted a beautiful relationship of un dying love

[MsJewel]

Thank Ron. :) Julie

[redzone]

Hannah ..your daughter?? She will always be the beauty touching you Julie and she will always be the poetry etched in your heart .. why do our babies always smell like sunshine?? Your poem does pull on our heart strings just Hannah pulls on yours .. ~~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Yes, a poem I wrote for my daughter. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. :) Julie

[redzone]

How is she Julie? Hope you don't mind my asking.

[MsJewel]

She is wonderful! I couldn't ask for more!