Beauty Touching Beauty

~ a love poem ~

photograph by Gail Nagle

 

 

As soft
as a snowflake
twirls through the sky
falling with the whisper
of a lullaby


As light
as the white clouds
angels dance upon
with a sprinkle of dew
to paint a new dawn


As sweet
as a rosebud
will bloom in the spring
scented with sunshine
as butterflies wing


As bright
as a rainbow
so tenderly laced
with warm golden ribbons
in heavens embrace


As strong
as the tether
that tenderly ties
beauty touching beauty
I look in her eyes…

 

 

As pure

as the poetry

I had only dreamt of

etched in my heart gently

forever, she’s love

 

Author's Note

~ for hannah ~

Reviews

[Trace]

I have four sons, and one daughter,
A daughter is something special,
But the love we feel for all of our children is what poetry is made of.

However, you have such a beautiful way of expressing that love, that none can compare.
This is exquisite.

Love it, LY2. Trace

[MsJewel]

Thank you Trace. They are poetry aren't they....I can't imagine my life without her...
Hugs, Julie

[Ladysue]

oh wow this is a superb..just beautiful with a lovely tone and ease..

[TL Boehm]

the best kind of love. I am stupid for my kids. At least from the perspective of affection. Nothing cures like a hug from my child. this is such a gentle kiss of a poem. Well done.

[Jen Yarrington]

Oh, sweet baby. There is no way to describe that "newborn honeymoon" and the adventure of parenthood that ensues. but somehow you've captured some of the sweetness.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Such a wonderful tribute to your daughter .I have two boys and one girl and though they get me mad more often than not lol.I could not think about them not being in my life.Well said my friend :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you ! :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

This is so lovely and wonderful.........colorful!
I love it!
Truly amazing!
:)

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. My daughter is a beautiful gift! :) Julie

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Photo and kind words described a beautiful place and time. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Wow. This is enough to make me cry. Just a little, when no one's looking.

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you felt this one .. :) Julie

[Brianna Brie]

This is absolutely gorgeous! My favorite verse being "the As bright as a rainbow so tenderly laced with warm golden ribbons in heavens embrace."

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment and your friend request. I look forward to reading your poetry! :) Julie

[Renée]

So lovely and tender your heart song .. touches deeply and leaves a warm, knowing smile …
Really a beautiful piece , I hope you share it with her someday..

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very sweet comment. :) Julie

[Renée]

My complete pleasure to read this piece..makes me long for a freshly powdered baby ( :

[Pryde Foltz]

Splendid word play and love.

[MsJewel]

Thank you :) Julie