For the One...

comforting memories

art ~ garmash

 

In sunlight’s grace,

                             warm with the day

in memories I long to stay

as windows shine with golden light

once dark with grief,

                      while in my sight

like dawns soft glimpse in morning skies

a comfortable silence will rise

 

and nightmares pass as dreams once sought

are bleeding ink,  

                       sharing a thought

to honor one whose touch  inspired

my sweet love songs…

              love never tired

and lives on as flowers bloom

                                      serenity fills my room

with beauty found as tears that stained

               will dissipate

       while love remains

in whispers of my poetry

                      and the comfort of his memory

 

Reviews

[Saddam]

my sweet love songs…
love never tired
This is a very sweet and lovely poem....every day we leave the night that sun is coming with a new hope, and truly love will be never tired.....I love this line and too inspired that I'll make one with this live one. Beautifully crafted for heart touch. thanks.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Pryde Foltz]

while love remains
in whispers of my poetry
and the comfort of his memory


Beautiful write and this last refrain was simply sublime.

[MsJewel]

Thank you Pryde! :) Julie

[wordman]

bad to lose someone and someone that gives you inspiration

[MsJewel]

Thanks Ron :) Julie

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Another brilliant poem you have painted. Bravo!

[MsJewel]

You are very sweet Gleb. Thank you! :) Julie

[Shaquana Adams]

I love when you can feel love in poetry and I definitely felt it in this one. You did a really god job :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you. I appreciate your wonderful comment. :) Julie

[Valeigh Starr]

This is beautiful. The meter is fantastically consistent, with one exception. The line "a comfortable silence will rise" doesn't quite fit with the placement of the accented syllables. Changing 'rise' to 'arise' would fix it, but I don't think the meter has to be perfect. As I said, this poem is already a beautiful expression of saudade. That's a Portuguese word I learned in Brazil. It's been explained to me as a sort of homesickness for a person, and I like to think I've learned what it means and how it feels. Your poem feels like that.

[redzone]

(((((Julie))))) love for him surely resides in you and in your poetry..

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend! :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

Very touching Princess..you have a beautiful heart and it shows here so clearly..!!
My admiration Julie...what a lucky man he is...to have such warm love.

Scott

[MsJewel]

Thank you Scott. I lost him way, way too soon. He died very young...and he was very special.
:)

[Scott Metro]

I'm sorry...I didn't get that he was gone in that way...sad...sorry.

[MsJewel]

Thank you..

[Raymond Federle]

Lovely remembered thoughts of yesterday... truly a wonderful poem. :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Raymond! :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

Lovely poem jewel. Bitter sweet

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is very sad but very beautiful. Great job!

[Brittany Zedalis]

Haha, as soon as I reviewed this, I went to my home page and saw the read request. xD

[MsJewel]

Thank you Brittany. I'm on my way to check out your page! :) Julie