Dancing in White

~ written in a Monotetra form ~

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

 

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A whisper breaks the silent night

as soft cascades, brilliant and bright

send shimmers of warm diamond light

dancing in white, dancing in white

 

 

Like falling stars just shooting by

lacy glitter lights up the sky

with such beauty to dress the eye

a tear may cry, a tear may cry

 

 

As the night sky begins to glow

a snow angel appears below

wings flutter in the fallen snow

a gorgeous show, a gorgeous show

 

 

And as she twirls in graceful stance

a melody sweet as romance

seems to play and to enhance

this lovely dance, this lovely dance

 

 

I catch my breath, but not with fright

as soft whispers create a sight

to send my heart this snowy night

dancing in white, dancing in white

~~~

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful places and visions create by the poem.
"And as she twirls in graceful stance
a melody sweet as romance
seems to play and to enhance
this lovely dance, this lovely dance"
Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lovely Julie absolutely lovely :P

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.

[Scott Metro]

This is so warm and romantic..you have a beautiful heart Princess.
another sigh,(,AHHHHH)

a snow angel appears below
wings flutter in the fallen snow

What a gift this line is..the gods favor you Julie...they really do !
My admiration.Julie...admiration.
Scott

[MsJewel]

You are so sweet. Thank you! :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott.....