Sunsets of Me and You

~ a romantic little scribble ~

art ~ razmov konstantin

 

The beauty

of your kiss

lingers

as warm, as sweet

as a sunset

weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion

            tied softly around my heart…

 

Your lips

compose beautiful ballads

to paint the sky

as the moon waits

for starlight’s dance

and the breeze whispers of love

                 your love

 

Gather this breeze, love

gather me

until skies ignite

and I surrender

to one more kiss…

 

        content

               sharing sunsets of me and you

 

 

                   

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

I love your poetry, Julie, it is entrancing and always leaves me smiling. It's hard to decide which lines to quote, but the ones that struck me first were:

as warm, as sweet
as a sunset
weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion
tied softly around my heart…

So very beautiful . . .

[MsJewel]

I'm thrilled you enjoy my poetry Joyce. I'm a fan of yours as well. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie

[icelandicblue]

The sun, a breeze and a kiss. So simple and so absolutely priceless.

[1VJ]

An enchanting surrender, just lovely!

[Cassie]

I really really love this romantic scribble and have gotten swept off by it. Totally on.point

[Pushkar Prabhat]

a treat for a fan!
i just love your poems.
:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie

[Rachel Anderson]

Wow. This is so good I had to add it to my library. I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work!

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Rachel. Thank you :) Julie

[Rachel Anderson]

You're welcome, Julie!

[Simran Kewlani]

Amazing. I love this poem a lot.
The way or I must say the theme used to express love is excellent.
It is an artistic way of expressing your feelings.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comments. I look forward to reading your poetry :) Julie

[kublakhan27]

You always bring an idyllic feel to your writing...your romantic works are innocent but assertive as well, like fairy tales for an older audience. Great work Julie :)

[MsJewel]

You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie

[ferousfinite]

Did you pick the photo then write about it? I sometimes find inspiration in many forms.=)

[MsJewel]

No, I wrote the poem first, but I love this artist. :) Julie

[Oyindamola Shoola]

very romantic and beautiful...well done

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Sue Hart]

My heart melts at the romance of this poem. To chose a line would be catastrophically wrong when the entirety is so powerfully given.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment ) Julie