Sunsets of Me and You
A Poem by
MsJewel
~ a romantic little scribble ~
art ~ razmov konstantin
T he beauty
of your kiss
lingers
as warm, as sweet
as a sunset
weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion
tied softly around my heart…
Y our lips
compose beautiful ballads
to paint the sky
as the moon waits
for starlight’s dance
and the breeze whispers of love
your love
G ather this breeze, love
gather me
until skies ignite
and I surrender
to one more kiss…
content
sharing sunsets of me and you
© 2014 MsJewel
Featured Review
I love your poetry, Julie, it is entrancing and always leaves me smiling. It's hard to decide which lines to quote, but the ones that struck me first were:
as warm, as sweet
as a sunset
weaving the sky with ribbons of crimson red passion
tied softly around my heart…
So very beautiful . . .
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I'm thrilled you enjoy my poetry Joyce. I'm a fan of yours as well. I appreciate you and your frien.. read more I'm thrilled you enjoy my poetry Joyce. I'm a fan of yours as well. I appreciate you and your friendship. :) Julie
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The sun, a breeze and a kiss. So simple and so absolutely priceless.
Posted 9 Years Ago
The sun, a breeze and a kiss. So simple and so absolutely priceless.
An enchanting surrender, just lovely!
Posted 9 Years Ago
An enchanting surrender, just lovely!
I really really love this romantic scribble and have gotten swept off by it. Totally on.point
Posted 9 Years Ago
I really really love this romantic scribble and have gotten swept off by it. Totally on.point
a treat for a fan!
i just love your poems.
:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
a treat for a fan!
i just love your poems.
:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for your very kind comment :) Julie
Wow. This is so good I had to add it to my library. I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Wow. This is so good I had to add it to my library. I absolutely love it! Keep up the good work!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
You are very kind Rachel. Thank you :) Julie
10 Years Ago
You're welcome, Julie!
Amazing. I love this poem a lot.
The way or I must say the theme used to express love is excellent.
It is an artistic way of expressing your feelings.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Amazing. I love this poem a lot.
The way or I must say the theme used to express love is excellent.
It is an artistic way of expressing your feelings.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for your very kind comments. I look forward to reading your poetry :) Julie
You always bring an idyllic feel to your writing...your romantic works are innocent but assertive as well, like fairy tales for an older audience. Great work Julie :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
You always bring an idyllic feel to your writing...your romantic works are innocent but assertive as well, like fairy tales for an older audience. Great work Julie :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
You are very kind. Thank you :) Julie
Did you pick the photo then write about it? I sometimes find inspiration in many forms.=)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Did you pick the photo then write about it? I sometimes find inspiration in many forms.=)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
No, I wrote the poem first, but I love this artist. :) Julie
very romantic and beautiful...well done
Posted 10 Years Ago
very romantic and beautiful...well done
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you! :) Julie
My heart melts at the romance of this poem. To chose a line would be catastrophically wrong when the entirety is so powerfully given.
Posted 10 Years Ago
My heart melts at the romance of this poem. To chose a line would be catastrophically wrong when the entirety is so powerfully given.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for your lovely comment ) Julie
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sunset ,
moon ,
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MsJewel The Beach, CA
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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's.
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