Outside Your Door

photograph by skiwasser65

 

 

Lost in the shadows, a single heart that grieves

                              too deeply to tell

 

            this stranger to your night

 

I shiver

in a breeze to cool to kiss away the tears

 

I close my eyes

   and yet I stare into the eyes of passion,

           the eyes of truth

                            eyes that dare not meet

 

                    in the shadows

   outside your door

 

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a highly emotive and intriguing write, Julie! If there is passion there, you can not disguise it. It will not go away by closing your eyes... the truth will come out. “In the shadows”...hmmm....brings to mind desire that is verboten. A poem with hidden meanings...and the graphic is the perfect one to accompany your words. Lydi**

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment Lydi. Have a lovely evening my friend :) Julie

[Baby Ricochet]

I really like this one. There's something frightened and hesitant about it.

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you like it. Thank you BR! :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

First off..the artwork is fantastic. Second....this is very nice Julie.
Lonely....
Short but sharp...
Enjoyed this Julie...
Scott

[MsJewel]

Thank you Scott! :) Julie

[Scott Metro]

It was my pleasure.