You...

You...

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ another little love poem ~

"

 

photograph compliments of pinterest

 

__________________

 

In a black and white existence

of narrow roads

and straight lines

you have me twirling

in paisley painted days

and red lipstick nights

 

Inspirational…perhaps

 

but one thing is certain

 

You

color my world

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© 2013 MsJewel


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wow Julie, paisley painted days and red lipstick nights, simply delicious and colorfully rich in... in.. "sighs", if you don't mind my saying, your poetry colors my (everyones) life... who would want narrow roads or straight lines ever again... not me. thanks Julie for a wonderful start to my day. ~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for a wonderful start to my day Curt! Happy New Year my friend. :) Julie



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Cool photo, great poem. It's the total package. You're in the big leagues now kid.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you BR! :) Julie
"Red lipstick nights," ooh-la-la! Your poetry is a work of art and the photo you posted is simply magnificent:) Perfection!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment Rebecca. Happy New Year my friend :) Julie
The sensual imagery and the message quite literally suffuses through to the very soul !

An imbuing, poetic write Ms Jewel !

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tom. Happy New Year! :) Julie
Tom

10 Years Ago

And the same to you Julie.....
"Lipstick nights" love the sound of that and the images it conjures! The colorful nature of this write goes far beyond the obvious adjectives. When a person brings color into your world, he is a keeper for sure. Great work, Julie. A keeper for me. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your wonderful comment Lydi! Happy New Year my friend! :) Julie
Oh geez Julie, this is just perfect, I love red lipstick and paisley brings back fond memories. You color my world with your sweet poetry girl! Have a grand New Year. :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda. I appreciate you and your friendship. Happy New Year! :) Julie
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

As I do yours Julie, always a pleasure to read you.
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adore your little love poems!

I have a thing for red, poems that manage to fit it in just seem more sensual.

the imagery is perfect....comes across as very visual and wanting.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Mark! Red is a very passionate color - one of my favs! :) Julie
wow Julie, paisley painted days and red lipstick nights, simply delicious and colorfully rich in... in.. "sighs", if you don't mind my saying, your poetry colors my (everyones) life... who would want narrow roads or straight lines ever again... not me. thanks Julie for a wonderful start to my day. ~~redzone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you for a wonderful start to my day Curt! Happy New Year my friend. :) Julie
I enjoy the idea of this. "Red lipstick nights".

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

We have to break out that red lipstick every now and then - ya know? Hugs, Julie
You found your Peacock with his mighty spread of feathers, very well expressed, great poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

Thank you Leigh! :) Julie
Intricately expressed, fave poetess!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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MsJewel

10 Years Ago

You are so kind. Thank you for your wonderful comment :) Julie

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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