Heart Prints

~ missing someone special ~

art ~ Lluis Ribas

 

 

There are no footsteps left

only mine

            wandering through memories

 

wondering why

after five years

                       three days

                                      and nine hours

                      the flowers still bloom without you…

 

       heart prints

Reviews

[Neon]

O' Mah Gosh! What the haven is this!
This write's so filled with peace and memories. The emotions, the past love, the cold breeze, the heart beat everything's well penned into the poem... and that's all what I damn loved to read.

Thanks for penning this marvelous piece with your scent that's of course made this write beautiful and enjoyable reading :)
Once again 100/100 Rating!

Your really damn cool!

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. This is one of my favorites as well, written for my mother. Hugs, Julie

[redzone]

Julie, your heart will still bear these "prints" 125 years, 7 months, 5 days and 6 hours from now, and the beach you walk will still bear your "heart prints" with the poetry you leave... so many memories flow this time of year... hope you are good... ~~redzone

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment dear friend. Yes, it is those heart prints that live on and on. Hugs, Julie

[Twisted Words (Tom)]

I like your variety in writing and depth of theme here. We were not meant to go through life with a static group, so I am grateful for the time with special people. Their prints stay as the world continues to spin.

[MsJewel]

You are so right my friend. It is those heart prints that will keep one warm on a winter day. Hugs, Julie

[ron]

This is wonderful, romantic. This one made my heart beat gently with love.

[MsJewel]

You are very kind Ron. Thank you! :) Julie

[ron]

You are most welcome Julie :)

[Ruth]

Beautiful...all the patterns of the universe still hold life to remind us when we need the ones we miss :) Love to you x

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your lovely comment Poppy! ;) Julie

[Ruth]

My pleasure x

[Jack...]

Julie, you have this knack for reaching in and touching my heart. This poem only continues that special way that you have with words. Simply beauitful my friend.

[MsJewel]

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one Jack. Have a beautiful day my friend :) Julie

[R. L. Hill]

How you do these baffles me, really. You capture the complexity of love in the simplest of ways. And the art you select for each of these...very good job, Julie dearest.

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Julie

[Raymond Federle]

Very lovely. Beautiful! :)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Raymond. Have a lovely day! :) Julie

[Saddam]

flower is blooming because it still believe love will be return.

[MsJewel]

A lovely thought Ssadd. Thanks so much! :) Julie

[wordman]

memories and emotions why and why not life as we know it
and you expressed it well with few words

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend :) Julie

[Trevor Barnett]

A very beautiful and simple write. I know you miss your mom, but she's still there even if that idea seems intangible. She's in your heart, memories, and personality. She is part of who you are Julie.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful day :) Julie