Red

 

photograph compliments of janedoe.com

 

 

Through pastel skies and sunlit beams

and fluffy clouds and autumn dreams

a leaf fluttered as warm wind blew...

My fragile heart it fluttered too

Through brilliant dawns and pearly dews
and pumpkin scents and gorgeous hues
of bright rainbows above my head
and leaves that fell in brilliant red

As autumn fades slowly from sight
and paints the sky her soft twilight

tree branches bend, lonely above

no shades of warmth, no shades of love

And rising winds that once blew warm
now with a chill take all the charm
of the season, now gone from sight...
An autumn moon hangs low tonight

So as I watch the changing sky
I shiver as the snowflakes fly
but I think I will dream instead
of warmer hues in shades of red

Reviews

[Solitary Traveler]

It is quite wild the color that starts this poem, but how it seems to end in grey, and sadness. I loved the start, and though Autumn is not my favorite time of the year, as it is when life is going to sleep, it is a colorful time. It is also a romantic time of year. Forest walks, leaves underfoot, a chill in the air so you have to cuddle close to a companion. then winter falls. All that's left is the dream. I liked it. Well written.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment. :) Julie

[Sarai Lee]

This is fantastic! A perfect rhythmic poem with lovely images of fall fading away to winter, and the the warmer hopes that come with dreams of Fall. I loved the rhyme and meter of this poem, it flows very well from one idea to the next and closes quiet with "warmer hues in shades of red". I too am a lover of Fall, and this played on that love so beautifully. Thank you for sharing this!

[Vidya Bacchus]

Your words and descriptions leave me dizzy with their beauty.Love this one julie:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)

[s y e]

Oooo, this is absolutely stunning Julie. Fall is a beautiful time of year.

[MsJewel]

It is beautiful. I wish it wouldn't end. Winter is a little too cold for me even here in southern california. :)Julie

[s y e]

It is freezing over here in Scotland. We just had a bad storm that brought floods, ice and snow... it's too cold, aha.

[MsJewel]

stay warm my friend!

[s y e]

You too! :-)

[redflutterby]

I might be partial to this poem because of the title..lol!! What's better then the color red in the fall? You've painted a picture of autumn in all its beauty and glory. Wonderful!! ;-)

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your very kind comment. I hope you're enjoying a beautiful evening :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You paint such a gorgeous visual... I adored every line...
Red is a vibrant color... and speaks volumes....
If any color could tangible, it would be "Red".

I'm delighted to read this, Julie...Truly Mesmerizing!~xoxo~:)

[MsJewel]

Thank you Robbie. Have a beautiful day my friend :) Julie

[Robbie~xoxo~]

My pleasure, always...xx :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful photo and amazing poetry. I like the change of color in the fall. Artwork for the wise in vision. The good description gave life to the photo. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[MsJewel]

Thank you for your wonderful comment. Fall isn't my favorite time of year, but the colors are poetic aren't they? :) Julie

[Rosaria_V]

I've missed your poems!! Well done as always

[MsJewel]

Thank you my sweet friend! :) Julie

[Rosaria_V]

so welcome lovely

[funsized fairy]

I absolutely love this poem. Fall is my favorite season and this brings it to life.

[MsJewel]

Thank you for the lovely comment. I look forward to reading your poetry :) julie

[funsized fairy]

No trouble at all:-)

[Laura Harrison]

This is a wonderful poem, your imagery is amazing!

[MsJewel]

Thank you! :) Julie

[Lourisa]

You imagery is amazing as always, it makes me want to cuddle up in it. A lovely poem of love and lost. It seems to be a strong theme in your work which you portray and express it masterfully. Thanks, Julie.

[MsJewel]

Thanks again Lourisa :) Julie