I think the cycles of the moon are generally identified with feminine cycles, Julie, hence the association with women's menstrual cycles, etc. - I was reading some of your other comments and found this was mentioned so I thought I'd chime in, too. But, regardless of the moon's sex, this is a very lovely poem. I loved your description of your "place,/somewhere between your heartbeat and the curve of your arm". Just perfect! Another great poem.
You will never need a muse pen in your writing beautiful poetry because you have an incredible talent within you for doing so. You truly have a beautiful poetic heart within you being able to express many different farm of poetry in beautiful ways. :) Larry
"somewhere between your heartbeat and the curve of your arm" Heavy sigh! Blissfully serene and romantic, Julie. The stuff love songs are written about. Gorgeous. Lydi**
Hopelessly romantic! So beautiful and gentle, Julie. The title is perfect and so is the imagery and flow. May love like this never be taken for granted.
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it Lourisa. Thanks for the great comment :) Julie
I have heard that so many times, when they are singing their songs, then of a sudden they all stop.
That is when you can hear the whispers of a heart beat of your lover, softly in your ear.
This is very tender and soft. LOVE IT. Trace
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I'm thrilled you like this one Tracey. Have a beautiful day my friend :) Julie
I've been writing poetry for 25 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart.
I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's.
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